poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Pathetic lill' me.. by clumseYdaiseY.

cleverdevice30 Jan 2004

Too right, let's go through it, class:
'Wanna' instead of 'want to'
'Purple'... doesn't need a capital p
'I' instead of 'i'
'It's' - no apostrophe with this 'its only a dream', its not a possesive, young lady.
Again, 'I', not 'i'
Third time, clumseYdaiseY, capital I for the self, thought you had sorted it out two lines before.
And a fourth!!!! Detention young lady, I've warned you about incorrect use of 'I'!
Now you've missed the capital of 'And'. May only be a conjunction, but its still important.
Double detention, you missed the capital T for 'There'. You appear to have been registered for last week, I can only conclude you were too busy passing notes to concentrate on what I was saying about the higher case.
Now algebra...