nentwined8 Apr 2004

"inner tissue of my soul" seems out of place, though it inspired me to write a short something that I can't post because the guy who runs this place is too much of a nazi and I already posted one thing today. But, moving on--

surronded -> surrounded

overall, this poem reads very awkwardly for me, and doesn't say much new for the path it treads.

I like the last four lines the best.