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ReplyTo a comment on Brush me away by nothingtoanyone.

Fraser Allonby Q.C.27 Apr 2004

This makes no sense whatsoever.

1. You appear to have omitted a word in line 1 between the words "my" and "has".

2. When you say, "broken into an unfixable size," do you actually mean, "broken into an unfixably small piece"?

3. You appear to have omitted a word in line 3 between the words "my" and "away".

4. When you say "rift raft," do you mean "riff raff"? If so, please consult a dictionary to discover the meaning of the phrase "riff raff" before reconsidering your use of the phrase.

5. When you say "dang," do you mean "dank"?

6. This poem fails.

7. You fail.

8. Q. E. D.

9. Thanks!

10. -10-