Re: A Dangling Poo by zodiac	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63	29-May-04/6:24 PM
I listened to your tunes today.
Re: My first Haiku by DJCopasetic	nentwined 66.92.183.34	29-May-04/7:40 PM
this more properly goes in the 'metaku' category. cute, though.
Re: Know Me by caitydee	caitydee 64.12.116.70	29-May-04/8:06 PM
no comments??
Re: dancing on air by killingjuliet	zodiac 65.161.41.48	30-May-04/4:36 AM
Sweet and quietly stellar.
Re: GENTLE JANE by titan69	zodiac 65.161.41.48	30-May-04/4:37 AM
The most stellar ode about finding out a girl's gay and yelling "you bitch" on poemranker, minus 2.
Re: lost in the riptide by killingjuliet	zodiac 65.161.41.48	30-May-04/4:39 AM
Not as stellar as the other ones, I'm afraid.
Re: you by killingjuliet	zodiac 65.161.41.48	30-May-04/4:42 AM
Hi, welcome to poemranker, and stellar poem! I've developed a really ultra-stellar tool to help budding poets in their writing, and posted it at this URL: http://tinyurl.com/ywr5z. Good luck and keep up the stellar work!
Re: Should A Ramble Make Sense? by Blindpoetry	zodiac 65.161.41.48	30-May-04/4:44 AM
No. But one should not ramble. Stellar use of exclamation marks, though. As always.
Re: dancing on air by killingjuliet	sliver 66.87.134.129	30-May-04/6:43 AM
I return your 6.
Re: lost in the riptide by killingjuliet	sliver 66.87.134.129	30-May-04/6:44 AM
I couldn't seem to find the flow.
Re: you by killingjuliet	sliver 66.87.134.129	30-May-04/6:47 AM
This one I like. good images, and I can almost smell the lilac.10
Re: My first Haiku by DJCopasetic	sliver 66.87.134.129	30-May-04/6:48 AM
Now that I'm sober I can read these! That whiskey kinda hurt.
Re: Voices Within by DJCopasetic	sliver 66.87.134.129	30-May-04/6:49 AM
Yep.
Re: argentina by ThePariahDog	ThePariahDog 68.211.175.138	30-May-04/9:08 AM
envoke isn't even a word, though i'd like to see your extended commentary
Re: you by killingjuliet	titan69 62.31.24.32	30-May-04/11:20 AM
yer like it good poem 9/10
regarding some deleted poem...	god'swife 4.232.177.77	30-May-04/2:05 PM
Why? is not good enough. No need. or Whatt ever the hell it is you say to people when your drunk and they're patronizing you. Your instincts are great. You're intouch, but as for my own tastes, I keep expecting a nice ginger/sesame salmon with couscous and you keep serving up pot roast, it's good, it's tender, and the potatoes are just right but... It's really all about me isn't it? Most everything is. The difference, for your writing, between great and good is the difference between eggshell and navajo white. That last line's a sensation.
Re: For Antony's unborn by Mona Lisa	god'swife 4.232.177.77	30-May-04/2:15 PM
Great.
Re: GENTLE JANE by titan69	god'swife 4.232.177.77	30-May-04/2:20 PM
Beer.
Re: dancing on air by killingjuliet	god'swife 4.232.177.77	30-May-04/2:22 PM
Nice ending. Drop magical mystery. It's like sand got into your peanut-butter and jam.
Re: lost in the riptide by killingjuliet	god'swife 4.232.177.77	30-May-04/2:23 PM
ugh.