| Re: The Sun and the Moon by Princess_Snowflake |
middenHeap 217.226.30.158 |
11-Jan-04/4:23 PM |
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snowflake -- what the hell are you talking about?
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| Re: The Angel at the arcade (this is actually an 'acne') by scitz |
fevriere 213.232.79.194 |
12-Jan-04/6:08 AM |
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I like the style a lot, and wish I had found it carved into a desk.
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| Re: Cherry Blossoms (anti-haiku) by middenHeap |
Freethinker1602 68.48.30.210 |
11-Jan-04/5:56 PM |
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you'd asked what had been spawned... the answer to that, is everything
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| Re: deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub |
fevriere 213.232.79.194 |
12-Jan-04/6:09 AM |
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It totally hits. I don't know what I like about it but I still like it.
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| Re: To the Storm - A Final Prayer by Satine |
little_big_nose 216.207.133.193 |
11-Jan-04/6:36 PM |
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This is very strong poetry which not many people are capable of
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| Re: Prepropositioned pudding by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
little_big_nose 216.207.133.193 |
11-Jan-04/6:38 PM |
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fucked up, like poems should be, this is a little too off for me
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| Re: Mermaid by lastobelus |
little_big_nose 216.207.133.193 |
11-Jan-04/6:49 PM |
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it's awsome writing, but a little long-winded
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| Re: A dream of a fruit-gun by zodiac |
INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105 |
11-Jan-04/6:52 PM |
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Get the hell outta here Zodiac! No. Nevermind. I'll show myself the door. Thank you.
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| Re: A dream of a fruit-gun by zodiac |
zodiac 67.240.155.97 |
11-Jan-04/7:41 PM |
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to INTRANSIT: No offense intended?
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| Re: The critic by juxtaposition |
little_big_nose 216.207.133.193 |
11-Jan-04/7:44 PM |
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whatever floats your goat dude
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| Re: New commandments by little_big_nose |
Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.126.116.54 |
11-Jan-04/10:29 PM |
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"Tho"? What are you stupid? The word is 'thou' you fucking ass. You should paint ball the inside of your mouth you fucking daft tit.
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| Re: The critic by juxtaposition |
middenHeap 213.61.217.3 |
12-Jan-04/1:17 AM |
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lol, you've been reading Mr. B.
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| Re: New commandments by little_big_nose |
middenHeap 213.61.217.3 |
12-Jan-04/1:23 AM |
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Little_Big_Nose & The Argument From Evil
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There once was a little big nose
Who ever the question did pose
If there's a god,
Why'd he give me a rod
That's only as big as my toes?
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| Re: New commandments by little_big_nose |
lastobelus 213.61.217.3 |
12-Jan-04/1:40 AM |
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There's a goth that forgets all his u's
When he rants at the folk in their pews
But if you can't spell
Than even in hell
You'll get nothing from us but abuse.
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| Re: New commandments by little_big_nose |
middenHeap 213.61.217.3 |
12-Jan-04/2:06 AM |
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There once was a black-clothed paintballer
Who at christians would constantly holler
He'd be far less wroth,
(& maybe more preppy than goth)
If only his dick would stand taller
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| Re: My thoughts and I by bdub420 |
fevriere 213.232.79.194 |
12-Jan-04/3:37 AM |
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It's quite simple, like a song, which makes it effective but telling instead of showing, which bores me a bit.
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| Re: The Blues by fevriere |
Everyone 131.111.212.215 |
12-Jan-04/3:45 AM |
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What the fuck is a quivering truth? Truth doesn't quiver.
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| Re: One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer |
fevriere 213.232.79.194 |
12-Jan-04/3:57 AM |
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Powerful words, excellent meter and rhythm.
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| Re: I read your diary by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
Everyone 131.111.212.215 |
12-Jan-04/4:27 AM |
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This truly ranks among the world's best disability haiku.
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| Re: The most trite garbage ever(in other words my love life) by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
fevriere 213.232.79.194 |
12-Jan-04/6:07 AM |
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No, no, please save it for yourself. Give us something entertaining, something I want to hear. And don't speak of daggers. Everyone knows there's no such thing.
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