Re: Kenny G by Everyone	Bachus 24.126.116.54	12-Jan-04/10:15 AM
Too many curls, yack!
Re: Violated by Ojiboch	hatedestruction 167.196.165.102	12-Jan-04/8:19 AM
whoa...
Re: The Ballad of Robert Kilroy-Silk by Steaming Dung Heap	Blue Magpie 212.205.251.115	12-Jan-04/9:12 AM
I guess he must be English.
Re: Snowflake by fevriere	Blue Magpie 212.205.251.115	12-Jan-04/9:15 AM
I lost it in a few places but you are talking about living in a foreign land so I guess that expected
Re: Up. by fevriere	Blue Magpie 212.205.251.115	12-Jan-04/9:17 AM
This looks a bit rough to me, like a diamond still partly encased in the rock that was its womb, it needs a little work. But the light is there.
Re: lemuridae by richa	Blue Magpie 212.205.251.115	12-Jan-04/9:20 AM
forest's wet or forest-wet. I didn't uderstand the ending at all so I will withold my vote.
Re: Audrey's poem by DeadtotheWorld	PunkyPanda 65.125.114.157	12-Jan-04/10:15 AM
Yeah, I'm Audrey's very besttest friend,Kristy, might I say, one of your best,Anthony!
Re: The Blues by fevriere	richa 81.178.250.95	12-Jan-04/11:12 AM
'Hang like blues' doesn't make any sense. And I know there are those that have to cause fear, that would have us believe there were criminals on every corner. Nevertheless how did these criminals manage to sneek into your poem. His hands kissed you? must be to do with strumming but..
Re: The Blues by fevriere	richa 81.178.250.95	12-Jan-04/11:12 AM
Dull as norfolk made me laugh
Re: Saturation Point by malakin	Bachus 24.126.116.54	12-Jan-04/11:43 AM
You should trip the black ones?
Re: Lynched by Bachus	SupremeDreamer 204.31.160.156	12-Jan-04/11:45 AM
LMAO. Indeed. Blessed with ten.
Re: Lament by Blue Magpie	Bachus 24.126.116.54	12-Jan-04/11:45 AM
That was a mouthful of warm ice-cream.
Re: The Ballad of Robert Kilroy-Silk by Steaming Dung Heap	Bachus 24.126.116.54	12-Jan-04/11:47 AM
Amen.
Re: Prepropositioned pudding by Jeremi B. Handrinos	SupremeDreamer 204.31.160.156	12-Jan-04/11:54 AM
Nice hunting traps. 8.
Re: American Eden v.2 [revised] by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 204.31.160.156	12-Jan-04/12:23 PM
Finally got around to giving this ole piece the face lift it desperately needed.
Re: American Eden v.2 [revised] by SupremeDreamer	horus8 24.126.116.54	12-Jan-04/12:30 PM
Canonic... sweit.
Re: The Ballad of Robert Kilroy-Silk by Steaming Dung Heap	Everyone 131.111.212.215	12-Jan-04/12:39 PM
You shut up about Kilroy.
Re: New commandments by little_big_nose	horus8 24.126.116.54	12-Jan-04/12:43 PM
There once was a twisted poof wizard that had the poetical skills of a lizard that had died on the road humping a horny toad With a leaky chode set to explode.
Re: Mermaid by lastobelus	SupremeDreamer 204.31.160.156	12-Jan-04/12:53 PM
A bit long.. alot of editing could be done (mostly minor tweaks allover) that could really improve this poem. Blessed with eight.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.160.156	12-Jan-04/1:07 PM
I ask myself those questions all the time... Blessed with nine.