| Re: Broken Love by Cougarchic |
sliver 63.190.80.159 |
9-Jan-04/12:54 AM |
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Hmm. I've never really felt love, and I thought that was painful, the DESIRE. But I've never had a broken jaw.Owww
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| Re: My Castle by Cougarchic |
sliver 63.190.80.159 |
9-Jan-04/1:03 AM |
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| Re: Endless Sleep by WithoutLife |
hatedestruction 167.196.165.143 |
9-Jan-04/5:35 AM |
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| Re: Oh So! by KezzY20 |
hatedestruction 167.196.165.143 |
9-Jan-04/5:36 AM |
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| Re: Oh No! by foothangingoutofass |
hatedestruction 167.196.165.143 |
9-Jan-04/5:38 AM |
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????rrrriiiiggghhhttttt.....
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
nothingtoanyone 65.125.114.157 |
9-Jan-04/10:05 AM |
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| Re: Hey! by Cha no Onna |
PunkyPanda 65.125.114.157 |
9-Jan-04/10:14 AM |
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::applauds:: By far the most creative...10! Lol.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
titan69 62.31.23.68 |
9-Jan-04/11:13 AM |
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Where did you stick the carrot?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
titan69 62.31.23.68 |
9-Jan-04/11:15 AM |
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| Re: Runaway by Cougarchic |
titan69 62.31.23.68 |
9-Jan-04/11:20 AM |
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| Re: Ode to the Wolf by Cougarchic |
titan69 62.31.23.68 |
9-Jan-04/11:23 AM |
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I realy like this.
Any thing to do with wolves is ok with me
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| Re: You must enter a title for your poem about lebsians! by OnTheOtherHand |
titan69 62.31.23.68 |
9-Jan-04/11:40 AM |
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shut up you grammar nob ed!
This pome made me hard?
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| Re: My Castle by Cougarchic |
horus8 24.126.116.54 |
9-Jan-04/12:51 PM |
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A steaming turd just bristling with activity.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
horus8 24.126.116.54 |
9-Jan-04/12:54 PM |
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Could you perhaps tear the windows and shatter the cloth so as not to be so excruciatingly boring next time? God, you would think you'd get sick of the cliche for a while and grow some balls of originality.
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| Re: Runaway by Cougarchic |
horus8 24.126.116.54 |
9-Jan-04/12:57 PM |
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So your saying don't run away? Jog in? walk within? Do the homeless have a harmonica or a quartet around a burn barrel?
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| Re: Ode to the Wolf by Cougarchic |
horus8 24.126.116.54 |
9-Jan-04/1:01 PM |
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I like how you used slyly and sly in the same poem with a fox to describe a wolf? Pumagirl!!! yay for you! This is hardly an ode? there's no indians, no game tax, no wolf boots? what kind of poet are you? This is a chode to lemurs if anything.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
irishfolksuicide 81.178.254.156 |
9-Jan-04/1:33 PM |
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Note to self:-
'You would do well to pay attention to the confusion engendered by your poetry and even your attempts at clarification. This and your previous poems show that you have an ability to come up with striking images and metaphors from time to time, but they always get lost in grammar/syntax that is simply poor, and a linguistic style that is bafflingly alien and makes me wonder if English is a second language for you. Given the unclear quality of your "clarification," I would suggest a grounding in basic communication prior to moving on to advanced endeavors such as poetry.'
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irishfolksuicide 81.178.254.156 |
9-Jan-04/1:37 PM |
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The laughing gnome fallen victim to an axe attack.
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| Re: Acrylic Sunrise by MacFrantic |
irishfolksuicide 81.178.254.156 |
9-Jan-04/1:43 PM |
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LSD?!
pink, orange, gold, amber.
Not bad but I have never seen midnight grey, and the midnight is already blue so there is not need to mention violet skies (a bit of a colour clash too).
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
INTRANSIT 64.12.96.46 |
9-Jan-04/2:38 PM |
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Note to myself: Jan 9th, good for humor, bad for giving money and silent prayers to underpriveleged persons. ha.
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