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little_big_nose 209.23.41.7 |
9-Jan-04/4:17 PM |
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pretty good, a little too confusing, but good all the same
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| Re: Pedophile by Lenore |
little_big_nose 209.23.41.7 |
9-Jan-04/4:18 PM |
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i just hope you know that all people make mistakes, and just cuz they didn't turn out in the end doesn't mean they didn't have a good family
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| Re: In the Waiting Room by Elizabeth Bishop by Princess_Snowflake |
little_big_nose 209.23.41.7 |
9-Jan-04/4:25 PM |
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| Re: your quiet complicity by silvertongueddevil |
little_big_nose 209.23.41.94 |
9-Jan-04/6:56 PM |
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my response has become a shuddering possession...deep man it's good
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| Re: Final Goodbye by psychedelic |
little_big_nose 209.23.41.94 |
9-Jan-04/6:58 PM |
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i also wish i had the strength, it's hard as hel, just know you aren't alone :)
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| Re: ~Witchcraft~ by Lenore |
little_big_nose 209.23.41.94 |
9-Jan-04/7:01 PM |
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easily the best witch poem i have ever read
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| Re: another funeral by lexicon |
little_big_nose 209.23.41.94 |
9-Jan-04/7:01 PM |
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| Re: Thank You by pnaipoet |
little_big_nose 209.23.41.94 |
9-Jan-04/7:04 PM |
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Holy shit! this is awsome, keep writing like this and you'll be famous some day
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| Re: ~Witchcraft~ by Lenore |
WithoutLife 172.150.199.69 |
9-Jan-04/7:05 PM |
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| Re: FAILED PRAYER by MEMORIES |
little_big_nose 209.23.41.94 |
9-Jan-04/7:05 PM |
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you have the 3 d's i like in poetry, deep, dark, and depressing, *applause*
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| Re: 2 Faced by jasondingus |
singinkygal 216.24.104.162 |
9-Jan-04/7:15 PM |
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Good poem Jay, I give it a 10
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| Re: Judge Me Not by jasondingus |
singinkygal 216.24.104.162 |
9-Jan-04/7:17 PM |
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| Re: Happy Birthday by psychedelic |
little_big_nose 209.23.41.94 |
9-Jan-04/7:18 PM |
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not gonna say anything, im just gonna give you a 9
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| Re: Aimless by jasondingus |
singinkygal 216.24.104.162 |
9-Jan-04/7:18 PM |
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| Re: Let's Play by jasondingus |
singinkygal 216.24.104.162 |
9-Jan-04/7:18 PM |
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| Re: Zooidal Veldt by Wulf |
little_big_nose 209.23.41.94 |
9-Jan-04/7:19 PM |
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An awsome read from beginning to end, i woulden't change anything
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| Re: Waiting to live by singinkygal |
little_big_nose 209.23.41.94 |
9-Jan-04/8:02 PM |
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I like how you make death and life seem the same
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| Re: Like A Rainbow by jasondingus |
singinkygal 216.24.104.162 |
9-Jan-04/7:20 PM |
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I love it when a man can be this poetic. Pour your heart out baby!!! 10
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| Re: Dream Me by jasondingus |
singinkygal 216.24.104.162 |
9-Jan-04/7:22 PM |
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Dream me loving this poem. love ya j
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| Re: Kill me by little_big_nose |
Blindpoetry 68.106.171.15 |
9-Jan-04/7:52 PM |
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hm... I'm not much of a "ranker" ... but I give it a seven...
I don't think i understood
"Bury me
Six feet-deep, with care
Woulden't want anyone to find me
Life was way too fair" ... um, maybe thats just me.
or
"I didn't deserve to live on your Earth" ? ... I thought life was fair?
all in all, I liked it... just those lines, above, got me confused...
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