poemranker ::Aimless by jasondingus

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Free verse № 78289

Aimless

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Dec 2003 · 1 comment

My soul is like the tide, And my heart like the ocean, The basis and foundation, For all my devotion, What's inside me, You can see, Like a ship wandering aimlessly, Upon the ocean, The tide must roll, Like emotions out of control, The tide comes in, The tide goes out, Like my spirit, Its cast about, Like a ship all alone, Needs the tide to carry on, Like my heart, Full of emotion, So are the waves upon the ocean!

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[10] singinkygal 9-Jan-04/7:18 PM Reply
So poetic