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Free verse № 113170

Untitled

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Sep 2004 · 0 comments

When your tempting essence entered my life, i felt only warning sighns as keen as a knife. All i could sense was a dead end road of pain, with nowhere to go and nothing to gain. But your word to me seemed so real, and the way being in your arms could make me feel. It was like you and me could do it all, i thought you would be there and never let me fall. I soon saw that from the start my instinkt was so right, but i couldn't stand the thought of not having you at night. When things in your life didn't seem to be going so good, I was always right there, and by your side i stood. You just kept me dancing to your siren song, though you knew there in your neglectfull heart I did not belong. You let me keep on trying and giving you my all,i knew that for my innocence you would surely fall. I could see deep in your eyes you were taken by my charm, but it didnt make you let go of the yearn you had to harm. I gave you this choice i gave you this one option, in hopes you would see all you could loose, and proceed with much more cuation. But you just had to be so stubburn you just had to be so cruel,refusing to understand that this didn't make you cool. I tried with all i had to brake free of your chains,but i have never had anyone run so intensly threw my viens. You comepletely took me over, and you tried knock me down,and when u knew all wanted was for us to end u tried to make me the clown. I still look back on You and me, and how your pride came between what we had, and its tuanting to know you fell for me too and right now your just as sad.

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