Re: The wise by richa	Caducus 195.92.168.171	31-Dec-03/6:01 AM
of a half-formed thought, just the uneven lines of every faked smile. This made me feel how aging is a complete waste of time if this is the case. Classy.
regarding some deleted poem...	Caducus 195.92.168.171	31-Dec-03/6:04 AM
I was just thinking how much mine, yours and so many others poetry styles have changed since i discovered p/r. Still find a feast of ideas from you, p/r is one cruel mofu of a site but the fruits come with buds after a while.
Re: Chaos & his dreamchild (genesis) --Revised Edition-- by SupremeDreamer	Caducus 195.92.168.171	31-Dec-03/6:07 AM
Liked it, one reason i did was because it has at least 2 parts it can be ended with an impact. Loved the 1st 3 big time.
regarding some deleted poem...	Blindpoetry 68.106.171.15	30-Dec-03/10:17 PM
Despite what other people think about it, I thought it was filled with much coolness. - but it took me a while to get it, but somehow, I did and I love it! A 9!
regarding some deleted poem...	titan69 213.48.74.35	31-Dec-03/1:17 AM
you must come from Cornwall with a name like that. I think you are a true poet and i like your work
Re: ummm by SILYLILGURL	SILYLILGURL 138.88.232.87	30-Dec-03/9:02 PM
I LOVE IT!
Re: ummm by SILYLILGURL	Blindpoetry 68.106.171.15	30-Dec-03/9:08 PM
haha! funny, no? I give it an 8, because i just thought that was hilarious!
Re: Anvil man by INTRANSIT	Caducus 195.92.168.171	31-Dec-03/6:09 AM
Excellent title. This could have been quite tedious but your a wordsmith meister and i have to say mr intransit....this is one of your best. (in my op) 10 deserves hits.
regarding some deleted poem...	Caducus 195.92.168.171	31-Dec-03/6:12 AM
not sure about the begining but the rest festoons like tinsel. The beginning seems clumsy and i think i'm being cruel to mr potato head because that dude don't belong in a poem. I'm warming to him. 8
Re: The Vagabond by Caducus	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	31-Dec-03/6:32 AM
Something for a nothing in everyones' nowhere. Brilliant. Small nits. I would make the leaves and wind whos, they are accompanyment to the man. I don't like the duplicitous rain, unless it has specific meaning, explain? (Crib)is slang for house in America find something else please. I'm totally lost with the crownings. Sorry. "Jettison of the richer man" also brilliant. And I liked the use of mackintosh. I don't mind going to the dictionary at all. Even for this small stuff, the gross of it is velly goot, yah.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	31-Dec-03/6:39 AM
Did this start as an actual Mad libs thing ? Kudos for taking something you might usually see kids playing with and giving it a try in the adult world. I think it actually works. Maybe it's no Picasso, but it certainly entertains. Kudos for the risk factor.
Re: The burlesque circus clown [revised] by Don-Quixote	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	31-Dec-03/6:44 AM
Whew. I thought I was the only buffon here. ha! Needs tweaks. Verbalize with volume and you'll find them. high nines.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	31-Dec-03/6:54 AM
Simple. Simple is good. jsp?id=67469-Trapped in a horseshoe.
Re: You tell me by Ariella	sliver 63.190.80.47	31-Dec-03/7:41 AM
You can't keep hiding for the rest of your life.
Re: Lie by Pervy Elf	sliver 63.190.80.47	31-Dec-03/7:43 AM
And still I search for it, I must be one of those fools they call human.
Re: Unchained by Hillarystep	sliver 63.190.80.47	31-Dec-03/7:46 AM
I like it, a well written poem, But Seraphic and manic don't seem to fit.
Re: Drinking and driving by SILYLILGURL	sliver 63.190.80.47	31-Dec-03/7:54 AM
Been there, stupidity is pervasive when alcohol is involved. Be more specific, discribe the scene, Mangled metal and broken glass, A pool of blood, A life gone in a flash. Screaming sirens pierce the air, Broken dreams scattered here and there. I'm not a poet, but something like that.
Re: Until I see you again by singinkygal	jasondingus 66.208.141.93	31-Dec-03/8:08 AM
You go girlfriend you just may be the next Emily Dickinson!
Re: Is this life real? by singinkygal	jasondingus 66.208.141.93	31-Dec-03/8:09 AM
J-lo doesn't have anything on you suga!
Re: Guilt by singinkygal	jasondingus 66.208.141.93	31-Dec-03/8:12 AM
Tell them all about it honey!