regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.228.141	31-Dec-03/12:27 PM
you will have to find some to vocalise about your tie(s).
Re: Lie by Pervy Elf	richa 81.178.228.141	31-Dec-03/12:31 PM
emotion is belief is lie.
Re: The Waning Spring by tuthaliash	richa 81.178.228.141	31-Dec-03/12:32 PM
very sweet, lots of heart.
regarding some deleted poem...	tuthaliash 63.198.141.118	31-Dec-03/12:35 PM
Another moment of genius frozen in time. You continue to impress me.
Re: Drag me Down, Deadweight by phbiscuit	richa 81.178.228.141	31-Dec-03/12:36 PM
Not sure where the walking comes from in the last line, or the cold for that matter (you said earlier the water was warmer where you were together- a rather sweet line). Also I find such fantasies both overdone and to a certain extent melodramatic. Other than that this is really good.
Re: Let's Play by jasondingus	richa 81.178.228.141	31-Dec-03/12:40 PM
Kind of literate, but you may just bore your conquest to sleep with lines like :'Lift my shirt, above my head,Let it fall, beside the bed, Flesh on flesh, we shall be, I need you to, ravage me,' It lacks a certain passion don't you think.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.228.141	31-Dec-03/12:44 PM
Like the first verse sounds, second verse follows on quite awkwardly and then 3 and 4. This is where the image and versatility of language is best. This is the poem at its most creative I think.
Re: Anvil man by INTRANSIT	richa 81.178.228.141	31-Dec-03/12:52 PM
Not sure about the you are this I am that approach. But the logic, storytelling of this piece is very well crafted. Scarcely a wasted word.
Re: Emotions and the night by Evening	richa 81.178.228.141	31-Dec-03/12:54 PM
the night smells spicy and sweet???? Other than that a well ordered poem and a killer last line.
Re: It's lonely at the top by Jeremi B. Handrinos	dmzoacan 67.242.201.62	31-Dec-03/1:17 PM
This is fantastically good. Also, you should read my Myspace journal.
Re: It's lonely at the top by Jeremi B. Handrinos	dmzoacan 67.242.201.62	31-Dec-03/1:20 PM
Specifically, I am posting a journal entry about you to my myspace journal.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.126.116.54	31-Dec-03/1:50 PM
I love you, you should call more.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	31-Dec-03/2:04 PM
and it's always the "adults" teaching the children, when it otter be the other way 'round, eh?
Re: I don't know why I love Def Lepard For Settle by horus8	richa 81.178.228.141	31-Dec-03/2:19 PM
'the drummer from def leopard has only one arm'? Thats nothing, the guy who produces their records is a dog!
regarding some deleted poem...	Joe-joe 68.194.47.34	31-Dec-03/2:42 PM
You have grossly overestimated our sense of curiosity and concern about the status of your spine. The realization that no one really cares can be quite a life changing event. I hope you deal with it in a level headed fashion.....I'd hate to find out that my words have moved you to roll your wheelchair off a cliff ....whether you do so by the stroke of your hands or from a running start.
regarding some deleted poem...	Joe-joe 68.194.47.34	31-Dec-03/2:46 PM
Rich - you know how fucking pig headed the Irish can be. Cross em once and you've made an enemy for life and beyond.
regarding some deleted poem...	irishfolksuicide 81.178.228.141	31-Dec-03/3:13 PM
Yes I once new a nice jewish girl. We split up because she abhorred my opinions on the holocaust. I didn't have any opinions, told her I didn't even know there had been one. Oh well, anyway a nicely written poem
Re: How to spend New Years in denial by Bachus	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	31-Dec-03/10:29 PM
bummer dude, bummer.
Re: advice to innovators by (m)ee cummings by irishfolksuicide	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	31-Dec-03/10:39 PM
She mite, then she mite not, though if she tried with all her mite, she mite - but only if she had the rite foresite to make it at the rite time in spite of [that other guy]'s rite to smite the mite, am I rite? Not quite.
Re: You tell me by Ariella	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	31-Dec-03/10:43 PM
peppered with error - and it needs salt.