regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	1-Jan-04/12:38 PM
I'd prefer S-4,L-4 (as) my face is starting to burn. And what's with S-3 and its' 1-1,2-2 rhyme? Other than those minor things, I say to hell with christmas altogether.
Re: Cornerstone by darkshark	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	1-Jan-04/7:41 AM
sounds like a real catch. I like the refrain - you shall have a snowman (8)
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	1-Jan-04/7:49 AM
killed me with the first line. dead. But I kept on reading in case it was poetic satire of some type, like some kind of storking large black wolf zombie - trapped forever as a creature of the night. Now I hang from a bony-fingered tree like a vampire bat and hand you an "L". I think you could make a good story from it, though.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	1-Jan-04/7:52 AM
loose lips ... are fun at parties. what is it a picture of? I will build you a snowman while the image forms in my tired head.
Re: chlorinated by ThePariahDog	some deleted user 146.201.34.86	1-Jan-04/10:17 AM
he's back! fantastic! -10-
Re: Lemon Dream vs. Reality by TanHand	Plaidypus 172.192.201.207	1-Jan-04/1:37 PM
You should check into a nursing home. I'm sure you'd rapidly acquire an audience there.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	1-Jan-04/2:29 PM
I do hope you've sent out "whilst the bells ring".
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	1-Jan-04/3:00 PM
"ending a bloodline" has to go.
Re: How to spend New Years in denial by Bachus	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	1-Jan-04/5:06 PM
Were Roman baths an early version of ethnic cleansing?
Re: Just For Two by Blindpoetry	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	1-Jan-04/5:08 PM
Sharp. like a Manatee.
Re: A spectacular poem by a handsome man by <{Baba^Yaga}>	purplestain 202.184.17.249	1-Jan-04/6:12 PM
very interesting and hilarious. i would like to meet the handsome poet though--10
Re: Just For Two by Blindpoetry	purplestain 202.184.17.249	1-Jan-04/6:28 PM
yeah...like that is so original--3
regarding some deleted poem...	purplestain 202.184.17.249	1-Jan-04/6:33 PM
yeah who needs christmas?--10
Re: I like to annoy people with my new digital camera by DavetheRave	electroman1979 205.188.208.105	1-Jan-04/9:11 PM
good poem
Re: Love Me Please by purplestain	purplestain 202.184.17.249	1-Jan-04/10:10 PM
did i just deleted the comments?
Re: The Fire of My Mind by RubyDragonKnight	dragonfly 67.192.110.221	1-Jan-04/10:55 PM
Valium works better.
Re: New Leaf by dragonfly	titan69 213.48.172.13	2-Jan-04/1:24 AM
I like this poem. Be strong turn over that new leaf and you will overcome your fears.
Re: Pawn by Blindpoetry	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.46	2-Jan-04/6:05 AM
Also, take the time to read comments on other poems you read. If something a writer said sparks your interest, follow it. The best part of poemranker is not necessarily the most recent poems posted. Roam the back halls. Study the graffiti. no vote
regarding some deleted poem...	Joe-joe 68.194.47.34	2-Jan-04/6:37 AM
You must read this in proper cadence to understand how it flows. If you a rich little white boy with no rythm it just ain't gonna sound right..so pull yo blue jeans down past yo waist, tilt yo baseball cap 45 degrees to the right and strike that gangsta pose before you read this one.
Re: Let's Play by jasondingus	tuthaliash 63.198.141.118	2-Jan-04/10:09 AM
I like erotic and/or romantic poetry like this, but it seems to me it would flow better if you wouldn't punctuate so often in the middle of a line where there is no grammatical need. Example: "What your love does to me" instead of "What your love, does to me." It certainly is hot and sweaty and breathes heavily, though, and I like that.