poemranker ::Love Me Please by purplestain

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Free verse № 78504

Love Me Please

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Jan 2004 · 2 comments

It’s getting colder in this dump where I lie I’m getting older and still wondering why I’m loveless and not deserving any It is not that I didn’t give it a try But no one ever gave me a chance Nobody tried to comprehend me I’m like a book waiting to be read A hungry soul waiting to be fed I’m looking for a song to sing Would someone play me the tune please? Right now I’m feeling low But I hope that doesn’t mean That love is gone and lost I wish someone would save me quick I need to get out from this ditch I want someone to hold me tight And tell me everything is alright Let me know if this is just a nightmare So I can wake up soon All I really want is to be loved

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[n/a] purplestain 1-Jan-04/10:10 PM Reply
did i just deleted the comments?
[7] titan69 2-Jan-04/12:36 PM Reply
It must be a terrible nightare not to be loved.
Wake up know your time has come.