| Re: ebb flow by crwncka1 |
crwncka1 66.141.119.42 |
19-Dec-03/5:01 AM |
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poetry is a creative art that can not be learned... beware
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| Re: My Soul is Stopping by somemorepoetry |
horus8 24.126.116.54 |
18-Dec-03/6:21 PM |
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| Re: Pyrrhus smoked the sun by SupremeDreamer |
darby pyn 198.81.26.40 |
18-Dec-03/7:30 PM |
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reminds me of camping at the beach.
I miss that . 9
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| Re: Pyrrhus smoked the sun by SupremeDreamer |
<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54 |
18-Dec-03/7:37 PM |
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Here's that morning star track, by the way. Merry christmas freak and have a safe one.
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| Re: Pyrrhus smoked the sun by SupremeDreamer |
<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54 |
18-Dec-03/7:39 PM |
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| Re: Ivory, slaves and gold by horus8 |
somemorepoetry 68.62.146.155 |
18-Dec-03/7:48 PM |
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i have just been educated
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Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
18-Dec-03/8:44 PM |
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you didn't know this facet of his glorious existance?
LoL - it's just one glittering side of a complicated cut.
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| Re: My Soul is Stopping by somemorepoetry |
<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54 |
18-Dec-03/9:01 PM |
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My soul is eating a corn dog and contemplating the hexlet.
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<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54 |
18-Dec-03/9:29 PM |
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<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54 |
18-Dec-03/9:38 PM |
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I too have a callow step, extremely callow, from my sole to my groin.
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SupremeDreamer 69.19.181.226 |
18-Dec-03/11:34 PM |
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Some spelling errors scattered, jerky flow- this could use some trimming and tweaked linebreaks. Other than that, not bad at all.
Blessed with eight.
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Everyone 81.128.249.185 |
19-Dec-03/12:38 AM |
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The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 |
19-Dec-03/1:53 AM |
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Back to life back to reality...me gusto mucho..
your play with words, "i arrange my atoms"..only IF
you are a free agent.And those fng cats, arent they
just so prrrrrfucked?
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The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 |
19-Dec-03/2:01 AM |
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He got to...And Gods mother too and Let us NOT forget the aciatic camels that Gaspar, Balthazar and Melchor rode on too. [the 3 magis names].. ahhh to be a fukeee!!! pass the frankincence MARY!
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The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 |
19-Dec-03/2:05 AM |
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Ola bebe..more tequila down at S.beach
tu lugar o el mio? Your place again??? or mine?
The milk has been thrown out ,but the eggnog is fresh!
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| Re: Pyrrhus smoked the sun by SupremeDreamer |
The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 |
19-Dec-03/2:23 AM |
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Your Modus operendi, thrills me to the core really.
A "mime" speaking in silence, but yet penetrating
the mind, with azure recolections of what it was,
as with a piercing of a spear.Bravo a 10+
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| Re: thoughts and feelings (draft) by crwncka1 |
Everyone 81.128.249.185 |
19-Dec-03/7:17 AM |
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Is this meant to be some sort of joke?
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| Re: You tempt me to stay Walter. by The_Third_Isis |
miraclemaker 63.164.145.85 |
19-Dec-03/8:13 AM |
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Beautiful.
Gorgeous.
However, it is a quite prosey.
Extract the phrases that most speak to you and discard the rest. -10-
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miraclemaker 63.164.145.85 |
19-Dec-03/8:15 AM |
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"i coughed up her skin"
more lines like this. . .
-10-
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| Re: I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake |
miraclemaker 63.164.145.85 |
19-Dec-03/8:17 AM |
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delicious.
my sentiments exactly.
but it must be organic - fewer chemicals.
"why can't i?"
YES
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