| Re: Tribute to "The Cow" by eyrbare |
Dan garcia-Black 66.159.206.11 |
25-Nov-03/11:40 AM |
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Good. I always say, "Milk a cow and you have drink for a day. Milk a bull and you have a friend for life."
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| Re: Breeding ground. by INTRANSIT |
ShaNoN+960317485 199.40.206.3 |
24-Nov-03/8:48 PM |
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INTRANSIT - ill say u doing great
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| Re: untitled (suggestions wanted) by Don-Quixote |
The_Third_Isis 24.126.116.54 |
24-Nov-03/10:01 PM |
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How about Sancho Panzas puberty... for the untitled heh,heh.Don I'am encantada que leiste mi poema, si es verdad sobre el tema 8 que lo de la harmonica quizas le falta practica, pero es uno de mis bebe's.And has alot of potential please, you are invited to continue giving me tips and bettering my poetry. how about the sonnata of the windmills..Thank you.Ciao bello!.
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| Re: The Chocolat Box by Samantha |
The_Third_Isis 24.126.116.54 |
24-Nov-03/10:12 PM |
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If life is a box of chocolates make mine Godiva dahlin. This piece is unique I like it Iam true to my selve's a wink from all of us. Chucles and giggles. I crown you with a 10!
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| Re: Come home by phbiscuit |
SupremeDreamer 204.31.166.247 |
24-Nov-03/11:21 PM |
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Isolation didn't make me happy. Leaving my house and strolling in san fran for 5 days did wonders though.
Blessed with seven.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72 |
25-Nov-03/5:37 AM |
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I don't know why you went lyric with this it's a fine poem, though bumpy in spots. Old tip. Read it aloud or have someone read it to you, the bumps will pop up like a weed through pavement.
My archives are all back, take a peek at The catamaran.
and......
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| Re: Breeding ground. by INTRANSIT |
Joe-joe 170.28.4.4 |
25-Nov-03/8:38 AM |
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Sounds like somebody cut you off on the Grand Central Parkway! Yeah some of what goes on in this city sucks but, to be honest with you, I've lived here all my life and desire to live no other place in the world. While it is true that NYC often reveals the worst possible human qualities it is also is loaded with great people doing great things every day. Unfortunately these people and their stories don't get much press so we are left only with the type of stereotype so elegantly reflected in your poem. By the way. Lady Liberty does not collect patina....she undergoes a thorough washing every six months.
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| Re: Grind by INTRANSIT |
Joe-joe 170.28.4.4 |
25-Nov-03/8:44 AM |
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I hope you wrote a tell all letter and placed it in a location where it could be easily found.....otherwise I would not count on seeing that epitaph any time in the foreseeable future.......
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peaceseeker 24.97.224.6 |
25-Nov-03/10:19 AM |
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Now this is poetry.
-not sure what sickle cleaves sky means, nor what tamarisks are.
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| Re: Grind by INTRANSIT |
peaceseeker 24.97.224.6 |
25-Nov-03/10:21 AM |
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| Re: Revolution by Nitroxide |
peaceseeker 24.97.224.6 |
25-Nov-03/10:25 AM |
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| Re: Lines and half lines by aliena |
Dan garcia-Black 66.159.206.11 |
25-Nov-03/11:30 AM |
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Been there. You make a great stone soup.
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| Re: Grind by INTRANSIT |
Dan garcia-Black 66.159.206.11 |
25-Nov-03/11:33 AM |
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INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105 |
25-Nov-03/11:36 AM |
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actions speak better than words. always have. always will.
And I have now rendered all poetry, moot.
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INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105 |
25-Nov-03/11:43 AM |
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Mrs. Hare,
First of all, my apologies if you are not a Mrs. Secondly, I have re-vamped the intersection poem and would appreciate your thoughts on it. If you would like my thoughts on -Reap-, I will be happy to oblige.
Thank you for your time.
intransit.
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| Re: Come home by phbiscuit |
tadpole 63.231.100.33 |
25-Nov-03/11:45 AM |
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I like the jist of it . . . 9
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| Re: Revolution by Nitroxide |
SupremeDreamer 204.31.160.55 |
25-Nov-03/11:49 AM |
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I said the same thing when I was thirteen? And realized that it's much more complicated than that.
blessed with 6.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
SupremeDreamer 204.31.160.55 |
25-Nov-03/11:55 AM |
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sickle & red eye.. quite a read- calm yet billowy, with well placed meaning. Yup, its a winner alright.
Blessed with 10.
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| Re: freewrite~1-10-10/11am by shadowaura |
tadpole 63.231.100.33 |
25-Nov-03/11:58 AM |
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| Re: Severed by shadowaura |
tadpole 63.231.100.33 |
25-Nov-03/12:01 PM |
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