Re: A "sirius"makeover by The_Third_Isis	The_Third_Isis 24.126.116.54	22-Nov-03/4:38 PM
I agree, I try to do this on my own.But editing from you is a plus love.Entonces
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.168.64	22-Nov-03/7:02 PM
Posted because? Felt like it.
Re: Scythe by Isis	The_Third_Isis 24.126.116.54	22-Nov-03/7:47 PM
Does it go with red or white wine(death) just inviting myself to dinner.I like it in a twisted way.Just a way to enter your realm..wine and a toothpick.
regarding some deleted poem...	The_Third_Isis 24.126.116.54	22-Nov-03/7:50 PM
That MONA LISA will get you everytime!
Re: The Pedestal And Promised Land by Judas kiss	The_Third_Isis 24.126.116.54	22-Nov-03/8:12 PM
The dog and the girl click theyre heel's and wake up at home.I as usual wind up looking for a heart... and get the lion's claw but only the claw..Everytime I book a flight to the promised land I get scattered I should join them on the pole, as I see the reflection of flyng monkeys on the tin mans armour I ponder on tommorows meeting with the witch. I love this one!
Re: uh oh by evergreen	The_Third_Isis 24.126.116.54	22-Nov-03/8:14 PM
Joe black.
regarding some deleted poem...	smlink84 68.98.150.99	22-Nov-03/9:43 PM
You are a confusion. you will probably think of this as a compliment. Think what ever you want, I'm done.
Re: The fight by INTRANSIT	smlink84 68.98.150.99	22-Nov-03/9:46 PM
Creative, destructive...sad.
regarding some deleted poem...	Don-Quixote 204.31.175.56	22-Nov-03/10:10 PM
Interesting form.. quite like it really. Blessed with 9.
Re: Islands Of Our King by Caducus	Y2kSlamPoet 204.31.160.146	23-Nov-03/5:01 AM
gods castle? I prefer my own mental temple. Nice poem- got war on your mind? Blessed with eight.
Re: an early discovery (reworking) by richa	Caducus 195.92.168.164	23-Nov-03/5:43 AM
someone who deserves the top my friend 10
Re: A "sirius"makeover by The_Third_Isis	SupremeDreamer 204.31.169.26	23-Nov-03/7:01 AM
looks like your family has a potent poet gene. Overall, blessed with eight.
Re: The fight by INTRANSIT	AuntyM 205.188.208.105	23-Nov-03/7:02 AM
Not exactly romantic. Great visual. I like it!!!!
Re: I don't like fish by INTRANSIT	AuntyM 205.188.208.105	23-Nov-03/7:09 AM
I enjoyed this. Especially the "I felt worse" I like the way you think!!
Re: Sweetart by Bachus	DreamerSupreme 204.31.169.26	23-Nov-03/8:21 AM
Like a car: built to breakdown. Blessed with eight.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.247.215	23-Nov-03/9:13 AM
this damn thing again! I'm trying to develop techniques to be better edit my work. The last version read like this: Like a bridge the wind blows across the current waters ripple; lines of a frown. And delicate as a vein pencil thin drawn on the banks weathered jaw. A line where the river had risen, had fallen high to low like an anchor. Where we sat together, and knew winter would drown.
regarding some deleted poem...	DreamerSupreme 204.31.169.26	23-Nov-03/9:18 AM
first line, ending it at winds threw me off. perhaps: "Near-winter and winds grasp" would flow smoother- better start the poem? or im just crazy, heh. heres an 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	DreamerSupreme 204.31.169.26	23-Nov-03/9:19 AM
refresh my memory.. how many times have you mutated this piece? just wondering.
Re: sumerian translation by vermeer33	richa 81.178.247.215	23-Nov-03/9:48 AM
Like the unusual phrasing of lines 3,4.
Re: The fight by INTRANSIT	richa 81.178.247.215	23-Nov-03/9:50 AM
like the rhyme savoir faire and chairs. and how the end stops dead