Re: Boxes by INTRANSIT	eyrbare 64.33.190.24	18-Nov-03/8:27 PM
Great! X
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 65.178.224.61	18-Nov-03/8:29 PM
I like this much better than the first, It seems to have more life, but who am I to say?
Re: Oral Sex by Shit-Crumpets	EaH4life 64.165.16.182	18-Nov-03/8:31 PM
Sure is BUddy
Re: Boxes by INTRANSIT	sliver 65.178.224.61	18-Nov-03/8:43 PM
I just tried to fix some. I hope it doesn't cause too much pain between your temples.
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 65.178.224.61	18-Nov-03/8:51 PM
Well, my dear, for starters, ease off, it doesn't make it any better. Good vent though, keep it comin'.
Re: untitled by highnightmaregurl	sliver 65.178.224.61	18-Nov-03/8:54 PM
And you will find it. Maybe you already have?
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 65.178.224.61	18-Nov-03/8:56 PM
A good starting point (IN whatever order)
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 65.178.224.61	18-Nov-03/8:57 PM
Yes, yes you will.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.126.116.54	18-Nov-03/9:14 PM
return library books Stop listening to downloaded audio books all nightlong. Masturbate. buy some honey.
Re: A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus	horus8 24.126.116.54	18-Nov-03/9:18 PM
"She smiles as she cries telling her late husband About how tall Billy’s getting." If you lost this? Good God, this would swing. 10.
Re: A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus	Mona Lisa 62.105.119.105	19-Nov-03/1:35 AM
dynamite
Re: Boxes by INTRANSIT	Caducus 195.92.168.167	19-Nov-03/4:18 AM
try damien hurst and you'll make yourself blled from scratching. very true point.
Re: The Turner Prize by Mona Lisa	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	19-Nov-03/6:11 AM
I like the write. Don't like the topic. You seem to do haikus well.
Re: A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.46	19-Nov-03/6:38 AM
Damian Hurst? Archaeology? Can you help me refine my search sir?
Re: Being by horus8	peaceseeker 63.164.145.33	19-Nov-03/8:33 AM
I liked "I see promise" (in my son's eyes). But, don't we choose who we love, that is, except our children? Also liked "I passed you at birth" (!!)
Re: The Turner Prize by Mona Lisa	<~> 167.206.181.179	19-Nov-03/8:45 AM
sums it up, all right.
Re: hall panful by skaskowski	<~> 167.206.181.179	19-Nov-03/8:49 AM
half great, all fun
Re: Fallow by <~>	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.46	19-Nov-03/8:51 AM
;)
regarding some deleted poem...	<~> 167.206.181.179	19-Nov-03/8:52 AM
funny.
regarding some deleted poem...	Roisin 149.170.39.33	19-Nov-03/8:54 AM
Wonderful! I especially like the way you've spaced the lines "fold it neatly and let it rest/ on my work desk" This works really well and gives a sense of pause which is relevant to the poem. Well done-10, am now off to read some more of yours!