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Free verse № 75974

hall panful

Member since 2001 · Posted 19 Nov 2003 · 1 comment

her hand dripped green as she pierced the mucus curtain to pull me from my old home to her home. she set my feet on fire and i danced unwillingly through an obstacle course, point A to point C. "my darling, your handprints are etched in my implants, if chance should sketch our hideaway's photo on an eraser, then i'll replace you with de-facer." too gone now to go now.

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[7] <~> 19-Nov-03/8:49 AM Reply
half great, all fun