Free verse № 119096

just can't

Member since 2005 · Posted 27 Jan 2005 · 3 comments

Can't get you out my mind so much time has went by but still i found myself dwelling in the moment in the time so i cry thinking only time will tell so i dwell thinking of the what ifs and what will be but now your to late i am gone only now a memory for you to see in your dreams

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3 comments

[n/a] peaceseeker 27-Jan-05/5:59 PM Reply

you can do it!
do something else, now.

[3] wilco 28-Jan-05/6:34 PM Reply

Spelling and grammar. Need to fix deez things, yo.

[2] Goad 6-Feb-05/5:10 PM Reply

A shy girl who was recently dumped
On PR with her poetry jumped.
We'll do nothing but damn her
For spelling and grammar
And rhyme have -- like love -- got her stumped.