Re: Spuna by <{Baba^Yaga}>	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.46	18-Nov-03/8:04 AM
Wait, I'll get my wallet. What are the current shares at?
Re: A girl named Chuck by Shardik	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	18-Nov-03/8:14 AM
and a cymbal crash at the end! well done. -9-
regarding some deleted poem...	Shardik 24.126.116.54	18-Nov-03/12:00 AM
A great lyric.
Re: A girl named Chuck by Shardik	ShaNoN+960317485 199.40.206.3	18-Nov-03/5:53 AM
just cause i am gay 2 :o)
Re: 10-72 by dragonfly	ShaNoN+960317485 199.40.206.3	18-Nov-03/6:00 AM
i am giving 2 much fucking 10 Just to show that i care But if i give into insanity a 0 Just would be enough just about here:o) Dragon of the fly i wud not lie Form'r not the later is what ill give here :o)
Re: Cock O Croo by ShaNoN+960317485	ShaNoN+960317485 199.40.206.3	18-Nov-03/7:15 AM
This is for You Larry & all those inane argument we had just to pass the time and for the sake argument. Hope you love it and nod to my beat - as you mostly do till an idea takes you on and press me brain, Like that one about, Elephants laying eggs; it still keeps a smile on me tired face. Cheers to you friend - Friends of facts & insanity. Hope the other guys doing their studies remember you like i do, or maybe a little more :o)
regarding some deleted poem...	ShaNoN+960317485 199.40.206.3	18-Nov-03/7:29 AM
:o)
Re: A girl named Chuck by Shardik	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.46	18-Nov-03/7:53 AM
Almost Dark Angelican. I think you could add to this. if you wanted.
Re: 10-72 by dragonfly	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	18-Nov-03/8:19 AM
a lovely codependent ditty. the only nit I can knit is that I'd like to see a better word than just gun, and cut off is screaming to be replaced. -8-
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	18-Nov-03/8:35 AM
Its a glosa - anyone heard of a glosa in these here parts? basically, given a poem or some other text - you make another poem using each line of the first as last lines in each stanza. Italics would have been nice, but the arrows are good enough, if perhaps distracting.
regarding some deleted poem...	peaceseeker 63.164.145.33	18-Nov-03/9:43 AM
The last four lines leave me hanging, say more about being in there too, maybe one more line.
Re: 10-72 by dragonfly	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	18-Nov-03/10:13 AM
Slap my ass and call me sally, this poem rocks!
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 147.226.5.3	18-Nov-03/10:58 AM
I wish I could be the "her"...
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	18-Nov-03/12:31 PM
what? no pantoum? and yet more homework for me. S-5 L-3 missing an -o-?
Re: My Angel of Darkness by goddessbyfire	goddessbyfire 199.88.20.121	18-Nov-03/1:12 PM
Revised this poem...changed the words up
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 147.154.235.51	18-Nov-03/1:12 PM
INTRANSIT wanted a pantoum; so here is a pantoum. For those wanting to know, a pantoum is a malayan form. The second and fourth line of each quatrain are duplicated in the first and third of the next. No rules on how many stanzas, and there is an arrangement between the beginning and end too, which I would have to look up to refresh my brain - you can prolly derive it from this example.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shardik 24.126.116.54	18-Nov-03/1:27 PM
I like this. Thanks for the lesson. Naturally, I have to write a better one now. You understand of course, but for now, I must say, I would give this a ten, but war in general just bores the Bejesus out of me. Especially the ones where everyone's crying in them. 9.
Re: Being by horus8	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	18-Nov-03/3:05 PM
a-men sister!!!
Re: "Burn" by goddessbyfire	horus8 24.126.116.54	18-Nov-03/3:12 PM
One sided, and lovely. 7.
Re: Crampa by horus8	capachijim 24.168.26.48	18-Nov-03/3:37 PM
ick -7-