regarding some deleted poem...	Katzclear 12.222.55.183	17-Nov-03/3:00 PM
omg.. omg... i absolutely LOVE this one. so beautiful!! I have my new favorite :) awwww
Re: Gibberish by eyrbare	sliver 63.190.80.132	17-Nov-03/3:01 PM
no.
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.190.80.132	17-Nov-03/3:09 PM
Now it's one poem every other day huh?
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.190.80.132	17-Nov-03/3:14 PM
My favorite from you so far I think:) see, no chin, just a BIG smile.
Re: Truth by eyrbare	sliver 63.190.80.132	17-Nov-03/3:16 PM
This is the closest one to a poem, I still need to read one more of yours.Somewhat thought provoking. I shall bestow an seven
Re: Jerry and Jack by eyrbare	sliver 63.190.80.132	17-Nov-03/3:19 PM
Yea, I've spent my share of time w/Jack too.
Re: Hidden by Miggy	sliver 63.190.80.132	17-Nov-03/3:22 PM
Not Bad at all, maybe more would be in order?
Re: Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz	sliver 63.190.80.132	17-Nov-03/3:28 PM
Yea, I like it. I haven't been on in a week or so, but I see the top 20 has been totally revamped. I had a few make it in there in their time, I am content at that. You should do one about the anonymous tens which sometimes appear there all the sudden. Here's a blue one for this little ditty. P>S> You know, only the guys who give the 0's are going to dislike this one.
Re: The Secrets Of Men by scitz	sliver 63.190.80.132	17-Nov-03/3:31 PM
Fantastic, I haven't read any of these yet, I think I'm going to enjoy reading your stuff. Nice synopsis by the way.
Re: Tiddles Breathes his Last by scitz	sliver 63.190.80.132	17-Nov-03/3:33 PM
Ouch, I've lost a few that way.
Re: I wanna die by scitz	sliver 63.190.80.132	17-Nov-03/3:36 PM
That aught ta show er.
Re: Bar Tale 2.0 by jessicazee	sliver 63.190.80.132	17-Nov-03/3:42 PM
Wish I coulda' been there
Re: Truth by eyrbare	richa 81.178.228.118	17-Nov-03/3:46 PM
The leaf is not violet to start with. Not being violet it is hidden (but how does heat hide). Comes to colour in autumn. We see it. This I think is the only way it makes sense but it is not the obvious interpretation. Also it is a million miles from my own understanding of truth. Other than that............ not bad.
Re: I Can't Believe You by Katzclear	horus8 24.126.116.54	17-Nov-03/3:50 PM
There are mistake in the last stanza L2, and S7 L1
Re: Breakdown of Poetry by eyrbare	horus8 24.126.116.54	17-Nov-03/3:54 PM
Pulp, squish, papyrus.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.126.116.54	17-Nov-03/3:56 PM
The last line could be dramatically inproved.
Re: Hidden by Miggy	horus8 24.126.116.54	17-Nov-03/4:03 PM
"Every moment it will begin" any moment... "with all the past we’ve been though" through "When I’m not gone afar Problems we never resolve" And this just makes no sense.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.126.116.54	17-Nov-03/4:10 PM
That's fucking the best ever "warped depeche mode dildo" lol!
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.126.116.54	17-Nov-03/4:18 PM
A clear victory. 10.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.46	17-Nov-03/4:32 PM
rockmaaaage......