| Re: Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz |
ShaNoN+960317485 199.40.206.3 |
17-Nov-03/5:43 AM |
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Well said and done - But am afraid not wortha zero nor a ten. So hows a Ronaldo 9 to pemper your stick:o)
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
ShaNoN+960317485 199.40.206.3 |
17-Nov-03/5:47 AM |
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| Re: Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz |
Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
17-Nov-03/6:09 AM |
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LoL - I feel your pain.
poetically brilliant:
"You sad cocksucking, moronic, insecure twats,
I hope you find your come-uppance,
In a shower of baseball bats."
I feel fairly safe in saying that prolly you are the first to rhyme bats with twats.
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| Re: The Balcony Boys by Shardik |
INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72 |
17-Nov-03/6:39 AM |
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I have seen, tho' never been to, this Wild Goose you speak of. Will there be more of this story? I hope so.
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| Re: You'd sell more hats, mugs, and shirts if they said... by Shardik |
INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72 |
17-Nov-03/6:52 AM |
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You are by far, the most interesting single serving person I have ever met. Did I say single serving? I meant Full course meal. With a backup bus of Disco retards. Full boat.
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| Re: Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz |
INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72 |
17-Nov-03/6:54 AM |
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Nah. shorten it to a villanelle for more punch. Judy.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
17-Nov-03/7:20 AM |
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Some very lovely language here.
first line in the second stanza would benefit from another poke at - as well as the third line of the last "thought....".
nice work.
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| Re: how bad is this by keatsImnot |
Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
17-Nov-03/8:01 AM |
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Pentameter flawlessly applied - Keats or not, well done on this.
gonna give this an -8-
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| Re: Pride by Art Glocken |
ShaNoN+960317485 199.40.206.3 |
17-Nov-03/9:12 AM |
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Liked ya idean but me think you can do better, cause of that i am bound to give u a 5 :o(
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| Re: Painting by Art Glocken |
Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
17-Nov-03/10:30 AM |
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difficult questions; difficult times...
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| Re: Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz |
richa 81.178.246.25 |
17-Nov-03/12:13 PM |
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'Your left and right hand are your wives,' no more explanation needed.
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| Re: Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
17-Nov-03/12:34 PM |
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I have spots and my finger won't stop stinking.
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| Re: Hidden by Miggy |
Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
17-Nov-03/1:54 PM |
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A lyric.
I think a bridge with more detail about this dirty little secret would be in order.
as it stands there are some nice bits, but it needs something more.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
17-Nov-03/1:58 PM |
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cats and bugs - nicely done!
I hate when mine eats spiders...
okay - now. it is about nature - and there is an implied season with the dragonfly - hey - this might even be a real haiku! (as close as one can get in engrish).
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| Re: Promises by blueiris1261 |
eyrbare 143.235.128.129 |
17-Nov-03/2:01 PM |
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Nice acrosstic (spell?) poem!
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eyrbare 143.235.128.129 |
17-Nov-03/2:04 PM |
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Very nice; can picture the scene well.
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| Re: I Can't Believe You by Katzclear |
sliver 63.190.80.132 |
17-Nov-03/2:54 PM |
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We men can be like that sometimes. He will realize what he missed. Perhaps by then you will find happiness again.
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| Re: I don't like fish by INTRANSIT |
Amelia 141.225.140.75 |
17-Nov-03/2:56 PM |
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LoL! Hey INTRANSIT, did you miss me?
all of a sudden I feel sick, I ate sushi this morning. Shit!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
sliver 63.190.80.132 |
17-Nov-03/2:57 PM |
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My cat like's grasshoppers, It hasn't caught any dragonflies (YET)I agree, with shush, probably what Haikuu was designed for.
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| Re: Breakdown of Poetry by eyrbare |
sliver 63.190.80.132 |
17-Nov-03/3:00 PM |
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