Simplisticaand quite normal, but yet lovely and wholesome, and american. I hear Mellencamp singing "pink houses" already.

All the time. Only aware energy has the strength to residue for eternally uncalculable periods of times upon other's that you've impressed in your life and various points in being. Otherwise, you will lead a most uneventful and easilly forgetable life on this planet if you don't know how to change your awareness.

This poem looked and resembled Helen Keller taking a long nap. At least to me it did.

I wish that cat would explode along with you and this poem.

Whoops, a poem about puppy love and long distance turmoil? That's unheard of.

If you added structure? you'd have a hippy night out to forget along with your keys, wallet and ride the next day.

Why do the ladies always fall the hardest for the homos? inaccessibility drives them pure red lipstick and fishnets.

A Poopmare, in vivid zero dimension.

Man baby Man baby that's your poem.

You must be a liquid lama?

Great way to avoid any conflict story wise! Though it tried to make you several times. You still avoided giving it life.

If silence bacffires? We can only hope it does right in your face blinding you just long enough to send you drifting across the median and into on coming traffic.

Chance is the prance of Lance the Gay! Prance then chance queer ants and posh pants Lance likes Trance music and getting fisted!

It rhymes; it must be good.

For the record, I don't agree with deleting comments. And I don't agree with your wings either. This cut SOUNDS perfect to me and I followed it easily. I think the problem with the springs was you were trying/thinking about compression springs versus extension springs. The only extension springs I can think of are on screen doors and engine throttles. Both bad Ideas for a poem.

I think the moon was jewish last night. What is the difference between being a racist and having a "severe distaste" for a peoples? Thank you. My eyes are bleeding now. No vote. Well written, however I got nothing from this one. shoot me.

You almost had me with the sodium chloride. Legumes? Beans? Huh? What if I'm a lefty? Will the recipie not work?

Fuckin' perfect.

Is there anyone besides me who can do that? I doubt it.

I like it, the darkness of it seems to touch my soul somehow.10