sliver
on wolf rose by titan69
5 Nov 2003, 8:32 PM
Or she may be the sheep caught by the wolf? who's to say
Perhaps she's bob's mom?
A vision of birth I would never have seen, but I've never been there except for my own. (I can't quite remember that one)
for future reference, the '-' is silent
From birth to a retirement home, your poetry is certainly expansive.
A castration festival! When are you cooking the oysters?
YES!! This is F'n great, well done man 10 beyond a doubt.
Poor Poor Little Critter. Have some of my fiddle strings. 17.77777773
Listening to the whitelight noise behind the lid of my eyes. 23.43456
Masochist! Very funny! 20.87546
Fred Durst is just another piece of work and wastes are oxygen.
And you, are an idiot who wasted my time reading this crap.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2003, 2:28 AM
Good
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2003, 5:55 AM
lol, nice poem <10>
It is very good.
have u used this site be4?
hmm...ok
i like this
love the poem, best one I read 2day <10>
I can't begin to describe how this poeme made me feel. Mostly like breaking all your fingers so you'd never again write anything like "Today I dressed myself in rain" or "We are primates who swallow the keys of freedom/Performing for others voyeuristic preconceptions".
This isn't a poem, it's pretentious guff with line breaks sprinkled arbitrarily throughout. Maybe you should try reading some real poetry by actual poets next time you're thinking of putting a draft of last year's suicide note through an autoformatter and posting it here.