King Abdullah II
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2003, 5:07 AM
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some deleted user
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2003, 5:09 AM
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Everybody thinks Horus8 should patent the contraption "vulva holster".
strippers are old nudes, and that does not bare thinking about
like the paint brush theme too, not sure about the decorating cliche stripping off.
Oh yes and rhyming for the sake of it will not impress anyone, and is most likely to take your poem in a direction you do not mean and waste your time.
Yep like it, especially the way the last line makes everything clear.
A little bit patronising and racist though.