Richard, I think you should change "she bled like a cut" to "she bled like a cunt". Then it would rhyme with the previous line "as plain as a shop front" Your friend, doug

I AM SUPERB THEREFORE I MUST VOTE -10-

He'll be back for the nails! I like this, clever but why did his pet hatreds leave when he bought the nails.

Greed is greed. Why slave to the #? Silly!

Like in "The Sixth Sense?"

Will these hands ne'er be dry?

Definite impression of fun and the having of it. Good Job. Good image.

Drugs are boring.

Sheepies are fun.

Like it always does.

A pole-less flagling.

I hate gym shoes. I hate poop. I hate dancing. But I love poetry 9.

I like the ideas behind your poems. I wish the search was working bacause I'm trying to find a poem someone wrote about Brighton Beach. The contrast between this and that poem about (somewhat) similar places is interesting.

All this because you can't find your evacuation harness? I'm touched, really, I am. Free plugs are, well, hard to come by. Thank you. I, of course, must give this a 10. But there are some errors I would like to point out. 1. My step mother stole the 13 grand. (Jane) 2. My mother is actually Hungarian, Basque, and German, South American indian. 3. Motherfucking, works better. I've never been fond of diminutives. I'm pleased you can laugh still being that backed up and constipated. It means there is still hope.

Addicted to writing feeble poetry's more like it.

God that was weak. No wonder you neede help defeating the Germans. You're all preoccupied by homosexuallity and fogging eachother's spectacles. What an embare-assing bunch of skinny pale inbreeds. Thank god for Yanks with the balls to pick up the much celebrated slack!

Gripping and free.

Oh. I see you can't be trusted. Thanks for the warning. 1 Scarface was better.

I like the cumbersome wording. I think it furthers your point.

You should be nudered. 9.