horus8
on voyeur by richa
16 Oct 2003, 1:27 PM
I bet they are.
squishy
The cadence is addictive, clean and well done. Thanks for the ride.
fairly engaging.
and in interesting format.
You are obviously a fag.
WEll, so you don't like cigarettes? poopy doppy do.
Ohio players. Or Sandusky Ohio. Both?
What? No Stimpy?
you are obviously a fuck hole.
wow, I love this poem.
my heart is a pasted paper scrap on my glossy chest
--is a great line
litter the streets of an abandoned bedroom city.
--is the best line
-10-
wow. this is amazing!
I love the first line.
This is quite nice; flowing, roaming within an easy pattern.
Having said that, I'm gonna haveta read it a few more times to figure out what the hell it's about - but, you know what? - I look forward to it.
Writ with a confident, skilled hand that pulls words as concepts onto stacks with a geometric efficiency.
Once again, I have to work to understand what shape this equation takes - but I want to.
I'll grant that it's probably clever - though it may sound more so than is so; I do, however, appreciate the unusual form.
The other two: sapphires; this - more muddy. I will admit, it can be fun to play in the mud.
If I was a good judge of character I wouldn't have to three man sling shot a warm potato at your ass once a day, nor would I be a Vet. An pleasant poem by thy way.
"Hey kids, this chess song hits the big top twenty at number 7!"
I would bet you're better at checkers.
Once my bum leaked a brackish honey, but just once. The it flowered with yeast.
I smile and Smile. I even giggled on cue.