some deleted user
on MicroPoem by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
19 Sep 2003, 5:28 PM
Ten-Two for the extra talkin'.
Who's "we"?
Rad.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Sep 2003, 6:11 PM
I leave love-streaks on windshields too! Get by my porch highway cruisers for luv!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Sep 2003, 6:16 PM
Why don't you all go find someone else to pick on and go play with yourselves in the mean time.
"all inside the land of Poemranker were trapped
like bugs hitting a zapper.
As the monitor went black
there was no escaping their fate."
Goodbye!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Sep 2003, 6:42 PM
"horus's dad wouldnt have killed the birds, he was smuggling them to get money for godsakes."
Ask him how many die in the process dumb ass.
I am not a whore, cunt nor any of the other hideous things you call me but if it boots your manly ego to demean the fairer gender, I won't stop you.
However, I promise you that one day, someone will.
So black magic that and here's a little <kiss> to seal it.
PS: -0- This is not a poem.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Sep 2003, 9:20 PM
the best bags of grass I ever had were from BC...but Alberta can't be far behind.
I traded my chakras in for tweed pants.
When my hands are in my pocket, im not rubbing mar-bles.
Didn't get this?1
Wow these are real feelings you have put down. How nice it is to see a soul bare, and slowly twisting.
YOURS I GUESS IS A CONSTANT PAIN.{just read comments}
AH,THE MUGGLES OF MAN. THIS TOUCHED ME, AN EASY TEN.
Thanks horus, i hated the original title.. i was sucked dry of ideas at the time.
Actually "Inconceivable" was a subtle play on the concept of God as rapist. (rape can lead to conception..hence Inconceivable)
If a comment has to be explained it wasn't as lovely as it could have been.
The whole idea is not good for me...being a Monotheisticist myself. shalom.
LAZY, CRASS NAZI PROPAGANDA.
Not what I expected, but a good shock-thinker of a poem. 9
Love is in truth a bergamot. Go now and buy one, feed, taste, understand.
Not my cup of tea, but okey. 4
What can I say? It's genius.
Call it "The Uraeus".
Jealousy and insecurity, burnin into a pathetic hate.GREAT 10
You've sure taken on some new kind of style. I'm all for the brevity and strange vibes. This is better than that "trees and churches" one. But, Parkinson's is not crazy...
immortality has little to do with your physical body.
blessed with 8
I don't think you had to write more than one. Or none.