Re: The Willy Poem by Engelbert Humpalot	mr cunt 85.210.204.236	2-Mar-07/6:03 PM
Fucking hilarious. Take 0/10.
Re: Israel (Through The Eyes Of One Jewish Soul) by slana5	mr cunt 85.210.204.236	2-Mar-07/6:04 PM
Fascist Yid rubbish. Israel should be wiped off the face of the earth.
Re: Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!	mr cunt 85.210.204.236	2-Mar-07/6:05 PM
Hilariously appalling. It could easily be part of the Yank National Anthem
Re: Flea poem by Sing4Jesus!	mr cunt 85.210.204.236	2-Mar-07/6:05 PM
Fabbo. May God bugger himself.
Re: Quantum Reality by Quarton	Dovina 208.127.90.245	2-Mar-07/8:50 PM
The title seems too narrow, since this is about more than quantum mechanics. It’s a kind of wandering theory of everything, where supernovae is misspelled. It’s a mixture of science and speculation, and edges on preaching. But you avoid that trap and stop after saying that we humans are, in your opinion, not separate entities as we suppose, but part of some organic whole. I’d like it better if it held closer to real science until the end, as it does in much of it, delaying “the inseparable cosmic web” idea. I think that would make your last verse more powerful.
Re: The Beginning by jessicazee	Dovina 208.127.90.245	2-Mar-07/8:55 PM
It's sketchy, as if meant for some special person. I'd have to ask you to fill in the gaps before I could say much more.
Re: Taste of Ash (A long project barely beginning) by sliver	Dovina 208.127.90.245	2-Mar-07/8:57 PM
First 2 lines are good. Then it runs amok, without more to go on.
Re: Taste of Ash (A long project barely beginning) by sliver	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/3:28 AM
Is this about life...longevity...spontanious combustion...without an inner fire, one could fizzel out...??? This is what I got from your lyrics...am I anywhere close? I'll vote later... :) Bethy
Re: In the assessment of zero by Prince of Void	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/3:36 AM
Sir, your poem in comments is better...however the one posted is good too...I thought of war and dying...helplessness and pain...sad thoughts but that is what popped into my mind... :) Bethy
Re: Quantum Reality by Quarton	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/3:44 AM
I read this twice...pause...three times...dito on science and speculation(Dovina)...second last para is my fav part...:) Bethy
Re: The Beginning by jessicazee	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/3:52 AM
I don't know why but I get it...I've been wearing a single shoe for 7 years...lol :) Bethy
Re: The Laws of Life by lrustagi	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/4:06 AM
very good, I like this form of language...It appeals to one of my other lives...:) :) Bethy
regarding some deleted poem...	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/4:10 AM
poo poo head...I hate it that your talent is so natural and raw!!! Have a sunny day :) Bethy
Re: A Single Strand of Golden Yellow by Aetius	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/4:13 AM
I love this kind of "other verse" I write alot of it...I will post my sweater poem soon as well...it was written many moons ago...:) Bethy
Re: Thought by Quarton	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/4:17 AM
This is fantastic!! a little hard to read...more flow and its a go for me... :) Bethy
Re: Shoe Thief by Blue Magpie	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/4:28 AM
A poetic story of canine reality...fun to read, my son loved it! he gives you a 9 and I gave you a 7, so...we compromised with an 8 :) Bethy
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 67.172.190.253	3-Mar-07/4:32 AM
nigh unto scent a mint simple but half way good
Re: looking for by Phalkon	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/4:39 AM
Writers block, It's easier if you try to eat Cherrio's with a fork. :) Bethy
regarding some deleted poem...	Ranger 81.103.124.179	3-Mar-07/8:28 AM
My life in jeopardy Mudered in cold blood, that's what I'm gonna be I ain't been home since Friday night and now my wife is coming after me...
Re: A Single Strand of Golden Yellow by Aetius	Ranger 81.103.124.179	3-Mar-07/8:29 AM
This is the level of mediocrity to which the majority of us aspire.