Bachus
on Dear Lord by simone_girard
15 Aug 2003, 12:10 PM
Ten!
Life worth living is worth living well.
This is one ribbed turd
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yes heres some krptosmurf
Good imagination. Kinda small for a superhero though
Burn baby burn.
I also love the band cheap trick.
casual poetry, or casual sex? let me guess
Damn... I've been trying to write like this forever-great.
Welcome to love, It'll do that to ya. I like your style, it reminds me of me.
I'm already gone and this is only the fourth poem of yours I've read. damn
I guess I'll have to freshen up on my Spanish. Keep singing' I like it.
That's how it happens
They just walk away
But you'll get used to it.
someday
Me too.
I like this one
I hope you don't die
I hope you see the grinning monkey
That's hiding on your back
Tell him to fuck off
He's got the wrong guy
(8)
not bad, groovy crescendo. 7
Very good. It set off my turrets. I like the way it flows. I enjoyed every word. I can't stand poems that have lots of filler. People concentrate too much on an attractive presentation and end up putting too much pen to paper.
(10)
ha ha aha
you have a bad head.
wow your poems are really good.
good old horus eight
he has anal sex with his mate
once his friend is at the end
good old homo just says 'bend'
my friend horus eight
loves to masturbate
he spends his day, lookin gay
wating to fuck his mate