this made me feel that familiar pain again. excellent as always. 9

Um, Caducus? You feelin' okay man? The last few poems have a down beat to them.

It may be pimply around the edges, it's almost spot on in rythm and has a mature message. there's potential here.

I like that this haiku actually gives the reader a picture of what is happening.

I like it but I think the metaphor at the end is just too blantent. Try being a little more subtle. 6

what the hell are you doing up this late? popping zits?

COOL!

awakened, to love, here. beautiful usage. is this feeling new? or are you revisiting, mi hermana?

i watched her, too. a few days ago. she was deft, and certain, and jerky in her haste. i could have broken her. but, as above, so below, yes? be well, thom. i go by <~> now. xo, sue.

Although I am sure it is written from the heart and the subject is something most can relate to, it is full of cliches and over done rhymes. A nice thought, but not very catching.

WOW! THIS POEM TOUCHED ME IN THE MOSTEST DEEPEST PLACES! HERE"S A 10!!!!!!

Nice poetic language, seen it before though

get ride of plight it looks forced other than that a fun poem

staring at a spider you saw a spide rin front of you, who would of thought. Other than that well put

Doesn't fit together well. It would be better without the capitalised onwards

LOL. What an Ironing Board. 10.

but, why this awkwardness? fear, of trusting? here, this is what i mean: "Then we sang of songs Which we would rather have not"

and then?

Acme.. The plague of teenage youth, that apparently never entirely goes away... 10.

lol