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Free verse № 58096

The Missing Love

by loveisendless

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 Jul 2003 · 2 comments

i've heard all is to whisper, & felt all is to see, from the silence of my prayers so sure, to the dreams i came to believe, & as the nights layed in darkness, & nothing was to touch love so near, until i felt your heart of a kiss, to make the magic reappear, BUT AS SOMETHING STILL FEELS SO EMPTY, AS THE SECRETS VANISHED TO THINK, UNTIL TIME OF TESTS LEAD TO FIND ME, THE MISSING LOVE..... of a golden link!

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2 comments

[0] JoyLuck 29-Jul-03/9:59 PM Reply
WOW! THIS POEM TOUCHED ME IN THE MOSTEST DEEPEST PLACES!
HERE"S A 10!!!!!!
[7] richa 29-Jul-03/11:36 PM Reply
Doesn't fit together well.

It would be better without the capitalised onwards