regarding some deleted poem...	Ranger 62.252.32.15	2-Jan-07/1:34 AM
Wahey!
Re: Fanatic by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	2-Jan-07/8:35 AM
Is this about Saddam Hussein? If so its brilliant. If not it makes no sense. Happy New Year, and enjoy the hadj.
Re: Edna's Christmas Farewell by Edna Sweetlove	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	2-Jan-07/8:36 AM
Verily the most whimsical jape of the season.
Re: Bitter by Ranger	some deleted user 80.225.123.186	2-Jan-07/12:59 PM
Interesting poem ranger, so she upset you then?! Nice use of verse and very morish. Colin
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 64.140.228.15	2-Jan-07/8:38 PM
This is fine, but the last line should read "that sing at night"
Re: Russian absinthe by AlexandraLeaving	some deleted user 64.140.228.15	2-Jan-07/8:52 PM
I like this also--it has a nice rhythm to it.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 64.140.228.15	2-Jan-07/8:57 PM
This would make a decent children's poem--and there is nothing wrong with that.
Re: Fanatic by Dovina	some deleted user 64.140.228.15	2-Jan-07/9:06 PM
"bogged in the gray slough of factuality." I quite like that line--it reminds me of a couple of people I know.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dental Panic 84.27.81.27	3-Jan-07/8:45 AM
Al Bashir is now under the chinese umbrella. As long as blood is cheaper than oil, arms trade a very profitable business and the security council a cruel joke, it will be hard to find a cure for the blind eye.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dental Panic 84.27.81.27	3-Jan-07/9:04 AM
Long. I was waiting for a line to make it worth the read but it did not come. I mean, look at it this way: “Scented flowers beaten into retreat by the fiery breath they have bathed in for many days now adding to the heady scent of freshness that sweeps down every street and into open windows filling every sinew and bringing cheer where once was tired damp faces now breathing easy for a while.” That’s tapewormin'. Masked by entertappin’.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dental Panic 84.27.81.27	3-Jan-07/9:08 AM
Dark night to greet. Reminded me of Pulp Fiction: I'm going medieval on you.
Re: new year by teenborg	Dental Panic 84.27.81.27	3-Jan-07/9:20 AM
"Cream carpets were not the best buy, were they? So- where was I?" It made me feel pretty sick, this poem. So I guess it's a good poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 64.140.228.166	4-Jan-07/3:54 AM
Welcome to poemranker FireFly. One thing about this site--if you want to recieve comments and votes on your work it would be helpful if you did the same for others. Now about the poem--two things--you don't have to capitalize the words after every comma--if it was intentional then every word in the left hand margin should be capitalized. Also the tense of the poem is off a bit. everything is in present tense until "the soul retrieved daylight" it should read "retrieves daylight--other than that, not a bad little poem. hope you hang around for a while.
Re: Moving On by MacFrantic	some deleted user 64.140.228.166	4-Jan-07/3:59 AM
Dovina is right, the rhythm and rhyme are great--nice work.
Re: Thoughts On Edible Creatures by MacFrantic	some deleted user 64.140.228.166	4-Jan-07/4:03 AM
Had a nice holiday huh!
Re: Spots of Gray by Miggy	some deleted user 64.140.228.166	4-Jan-07/4:12 AM
This is good--I know this is a lyric and it's hard to critique without the music, but to me the rhythm is off in a couple of places--good work though.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	4-Jan-07/7:15 AM
Tremdously deep, alerting, and faintly distressing.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	4-Jan-07/7:17 AM
i'd sooner eat a spoonful of tramp trifle than give this poem a vote of less than eight.
Re: Dream Grower by Enkidu	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	4-Jan-07/7:28 AM
I thought this said "Dream Gower" which could have been about the majestic cover drive of the finest left handed batsman this country has ever produced. However you had to ruin it by not mentioning that at all, and actually having a title which resembles "Dream Gower", instead you seem to have produced a poem which could easily have been written by an eight year old who has been drinking too much pottery glaze.
Re: Let Me Entertain You by Bethy	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	4-Jan-07/7:38 AM
Jolly ace.