Nice visuals

Sounds trekish

sounds like a drinking song.

sounds irish.

Kid's think they know what's best for everybody. Kid's have no common sense. Kid's can put themselves and everyone around them in danger. Damn! I guess politicians are kids. Great poem. It resonates on way too many levels (perhaps even the level on which it was written). Love it's redemption qualities.

Great work there INTRANSIT! It's ironic how distant yet how similar the professions of poet and trucker can sometimes be! Come round any time and I'll let you fuck my face!

I can relate to that. I broke a rib last weekend riding a donkey.

what is a fornice? a furnace? call me confused.

an insightful alck of vulgarity compared to your other poems. more like this, please.

SHiest! I could visualize the whole mess, nice.

powerful, except you could stengthen the impact by losing the "tiny thong underwear" line--it borders on perversion and i don't think that's what you wanted here.

very good, can I ask you a question?

very good, can I ask you a question?

too true.

Cool

mon amie mon contre ami mon amie mon contre amie How strange. I haven't seen this til now. I feel that if your Therody and my Underseas came to life and met they would wed and give birth to a thousand pisciform children. Slippery ominess children. Then you and I would be forced to go out in our tiny boat, cast our nets, and draw back all our weird abundance before it devoured everything in its path.

lame.

roll again, please

Awesome, could be better if u dropped the last para tho. And changed "pillow" to somthing else

(snif)