Blindproject217
on I'll Break You Down by Crakyamuni
18 Mar 2003, 5:56 PM
Corporate america sucks, of as horus would say laggniappe
um..hmm
What a hoot!
THIS IS ALMOST AS GOOD AS 'less than a sentence'.
O.k,this is a deep question,but here goes.
What are your views on how the universe i.e. infinity and eternaty work?
Crap i meant "or as"i always do that
Strange and obscene
Ahh poor Orson. :( I was rooting for him too. Oh well. 8.
Can the author tell me how this makes sense
Hmmm
Pop Quiz: what did Kurt Godel, Ludwig Wittgenstein and Werner Heisenberg prove? Answer: you don't know, you can't know, you can't say and you can't understand. This applies to everything. Even Christian theology implies these things. You should stop being so goddamned selfish and give something back to the earth instead of engaging in futile debate concerning what is none of your business. It don't matter. It just don't matter. Oh god we can't even establish causality *WUH HUH HUH* can't observe something without affecting it *SNRKNKNK* language is no better than mathematics, which is a pile of hooey anyway **SBBLLB WUH HUH HUH HUH, HUH WUH WUH** Bertrand Russell where are you now that we need you here?? **WUH HUH HUH** Whitehead?? Anyone??????///////////////////
The whole baby oil thing sounds a little wierd but works. Could have used a little more backround on the charecter maybe
This poem reminds me of a Project 86 song in the way it is put together. Nice job horus, whats with the 8 in your name anyways?
Here it is,
Submerged in endless (trailing off)
I watch them fade by (sigh)
Lifeless and Stone-faced (paining on)
I see...
The face I use to be
They want to feel this (straining on)
They want to sense this (now)
Drunk with existence (waking me)
I'll show you something (someone) you can feel
Excellent, and amusing, I'm giving you ten for making me smile.
This is really Wierd and somewhat Sad. Feel's like you have some really dangerous emotions in you heart. Thanks for reading my poems. I never really worked hard on them as I should. I will try on my next poem.
Absolutely beautiful! I'm not much into rhyming, but this flowed so well. I feel the pain of your loss here, and was truly touched by your wrods.
Thanks for sharing so much of what you feel.
Thom
There are some very interesting symbols and feelings twisting around in this piece. 8.
weren't we suppose to discuss something? try jeremi_handrinos@yahoo.com
Yes. YESA!