Garrett S Sexton
on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8
23 Feb 2003, 2:54 AM
THE GAY BOYS SURE LOVED IT.I BET YOU CAN TATSE THE CREAM.
A good effort my young sire, however heartblink is a failed image it doesn't really work so amend it and consult me once you have finished. May I offer you respectability in a 7, quite moving.
I see your an amiable laddie, who kindly offers his comments would you oblige me sometime and grease my whip, onw would appreciate your input on mine
good 4 u
O_O coo....
You're power is in the seaweed egg-drop. Or perhaps it's the Ahi, broiled just right. Either way you win, straight out, 1st prize, and here we go...
ha ha,home of the whopper.Didn't think i'd see you down here.Cold isn't it.HA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
No comment on the message behind the poem, except that a few assumptions are being made throughout it. On the poem itself I would have liked to have given it a 9. Some of the verse did seem a little forced however so an 8. Very nice though.
I say this is Hot Diggity Dog, Bravo I say, Yes Bravo indeed
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BORING, NOT CLEVER, NOT FUNNY, COMPLETE WASTE OF FUCKING TIME ,,2
Artificial smiles were true a 100,000 years ago too guys!
A pile of burning lies...?
Does that look anything like
a great white concert?
my my my
is this 'rampant fatal infection'
a virus a bacteria, or perhaps a metaphor.
I'm guessing from this poem you are older than your conquest by a fair few years, in my country you would be known as a nonce. Of course I'm sure this is a fictitious poem and like your last one black buns wants to bring up some controversy. Shame it's shit and yes the English do have a God given right to their own language - you fucking fool.
2 complaints.
1st i don't think you need to add a second "in the closet" in the first verse.
2nd the last line of the second verse is absolutely pathetic
i wish my mother wuz dead so i could write a poeme this beautiful..9..
mmmm i like it and i get the end but its a litle unclear and anonymous
I BET ITS NOT JUST YOUR HABD THATS TANNED AFTER THIS.
OVERRATED BOLLOCKS;;;;;;;;;3
Loved the trilogy pig dude
Yes, Yes one can see a story unfolding here, Artificial smiles, so true this day and age. 6
quaint..sad..