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on Through Poetry by newdawnfades
22 Feb 2003, 11:03 PM
We hope.
This is good, great structure, killer punch line.
Hmmm. I'm sleeping third row center right behind the old lady with the bad perm. -7-
"Magic tears of Happiness". A mother's tears.
Thisis going to take weeks for me. My son is 12, sleeps in my bed, holds my hand everywhere. Tells me he loves me 5, maybe 6 times each day. He looks at me straight in the eyes.
FOUND THIS VERY HARD 2 READ BUT EASY YO GRASP, FEEL KINDA SAD, YET IT ENDS POSITIVE I GUESS, DAMN GOOD MAN 10
"Dusking" and "same sky" you have crossed the thresh-hold, my favorite poem of yours.
Yeah I agree with your poem. my girlfriend left me and it really helps to write your feelings in a poem! 9++
I hope ur mom gets ur prayers this time ;)
I don't understand, but it sounds good 8+
Hi,
Sad poem's often seem stronger than happy ones, is that we feel the negatives so much more or simply that we take the good times for granted.
Vindictive or Vendetta but not Vendictive to my knowledge, though i am always willing to learn. Both the above are from the same italian root however, and someone has to make up the new words.
A precious poem. Oh, how needing I am of the contrary point of view. This is a great poem, especially when spoken aloud. The last couplet's a true killer. I think you are under appreciated, congratulations, the world knows nothing of its greatest men.
Have you seen Z. She did not go to that Great White concert did she? she is a metal chic, you know. Where was it. The news here is piss poor.
Blood on the tracks. I swear, you're on to something. Find find find.
fix the end, otherwise perfect. Less is more, more is more. I'm a whore.
Wow I didn't know that I was so well known on this site to be included in something like this. I'm touched even though you have me connected with D.A. and I'm not a gay. -10-
This shows your consternation about something my dear, I do hope you are okay, love and thoughts MP.
Try and get some context and shape to it, your in my prayers tonight my dear.
Yeah you are in our thoughts too Mr. Pig.
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As a satire it's great as a poem it's shit, as toilet paper it was pace!11!picante sauce 7.
You should write a poem about a woman who is such a psycho telephone stalker, people have to change their home phone numbers to avoid the bitch. Never mind, you'd do a crappy job because you're a terrible writer, and an even worse human being.