no. to find your wooden shoes a haven for tasteless termites.

pure piranha.

very deep and oddly like lessons, kinda mad, but good thoguh until is still my favourite ill give you 7

lose last line.

I like the last bit best i dont really realte to this poem though im afraid.

lose the "i cringe", so that we can. get it? otherwise, loveley

jesus. "timless"? no. listless.limp.vague.weak.shit.shit.shit. here a 10. you obviously need a hug and more sugar on your raisen bran. fuck. i'm going to the random area. where the real poets once dwelt.

you're obviously stupid, and have never been high a day in your life. Tell me how can you see ghosts when you've never seen life. idiot.

settle.

yeah. that's what they all say. next.

I see your winnie the pooh, and raise you some beef tar tar.

I guess I have no sense of humor cause I didn't find these forced rhymes and middle school jokes combined in a mess of bad poetry funny. Oh well. By the way if you're going to say fuck then just say it.

i like it cause its different, its really interesting though, the way that it has the random nature, i like that about it, a bit too conceptual for me

ok this one does deserve a 10, i like it but i dont know why!

totally fucking brilliant. "You get "THE HUT" with penguine feet for proper shuffling. you need a turntable solo though <inbetween> {with a chicky, a wicky, a booger flicky.chik chik chaw chik chaw chicky chaw.a chicky, a wicky, a booger flicky.chik chik chaw chik chaw chicky chaw.

shit, or get off the pot. yeah that's complex.

i'd lose the last line completely.

I would too....Hye look I'd kind of like to explain and apologize for sunday morning...

"wrting" almost a pure typo. you are a hindu.

10's seem so empty