the wolf needs a pika in it's mouth...too funny. nice one.

I've seen this happen to other people's wives, now it's happening to mine.

I SALUTE U SIR

Fucking newbies. 10.

lol whats a nutt ree?

God I love mozilla

lol whos dark angel...lol

I heard he was bi, and by that I mean bi the way I'm a complete asstuffer

This is really good. I agree with Vulcan re: the third stanza--it really is the best--the images are great. Could you somehow sustain the imagery throughout? S2--"crumbling foundation" really is a cliche--might want to work something else in there.

Wow! Your work often reminds me of Sylvia Plath--you have similarly startling images and a unique way of putting everything together. I have trouble following you sometimes--this seems more coherent than some of your others. Don't get too locked into your own patterns.

How did you get him to pose for you?? He won't sit still when I do this.

i knew it..you're the devil homer. now i demand you give me back all the eights i've given you da..and take this ten...you're a bastard..als0: how dare you toss my ceremonial napkin...piker! SCALLIWAG. the welsh must be STOPPED!.

I HAVE NEVER FUCKING LAUGHED THIS HARD! "BACHIANSWAGGER AWARD for brilliant use of everything. 10!H

smiths rawk dewd lol asl?

Even as we speak he is propped up like a toy soldier and stopped up like a toilet. 10.

ummm right and the oint to this would be....?

You sure I'm a baffoon? Not a bassoon or a buffoon? A buffet maybe? No--a bouquet! Sorry to disillusion you JoyfulySlotterdKitty, but I gave you a two because your poem was juvenile, trite, and completely uninteresting both in content and execution. Nowhere did I "jest at your longing"--I did poke fun at a couple of the comments on it, but so? Get over it.

way to go. Many ppl dislike dark angel. I don't know what their problem is. Keep an open mind though. and please. Check out my writings. I hope you enjoy them. you know what we need to have a petition about dark angel. Have everyone that hates them give it a 10 and put their reason for hating them. It can be called "Ode to the Infamous Angel"

ah 8

A new genus of genius