I can't quite see the veins on its marble buttocks. Perhaps, i need my spectacles.

they are.

pretty good i liked it

Wow. We need a new catagory. Shit text-art. 0. Fuck off. Go. Never return. NOW!

this about ymerej?

this about ymerej?

pretty good check mine out

aww how cute i love it its great just for dat u get a 10

omg awww dat was so good i love it mami

this is getting pretty fucking confusing now. Which one of me just did the ascii art of gay porn? PS I love you

Yes, I have seen this once before. When Count Vlad impaled the Turks. Thank you Bachus for the warning. I will keep keep it in mind.

You could improve the power of the nouns and adjectives by opening a thesaurus and a dictionary..the structure and theme, and the arc are fine. I will give you a ten to get you back to five.

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This is FUCKING EXCELLENT u deserve a rosette

kicked my ass dude

wh..whoahhh..who..wha..whoaah

on line 54 when you said "\_/ \_/ \ \hoi\88-\_/ \_8]'|88LLSD88 888|8\_/ \_/ 888 888 \_/ \_/" what did you mean?? The rest makes sense.

Look, I don't know if this is true or not and frankly, I don't care. If you have problems, sort them out off here. This is not poetry (although it is better than some), it is a snipe at someone. I don't care how justified you think you are defending yourself, you shouldn't bother sinking to his level. Take it off the site.

More art than I poem, methinks. How about entering it at the tate modern?

a bit farouche, and self absorbed, but other than that..a tad starchy.