brazen
on 9/11/2001 by MuDvAyNe
9 Jan 2003, 12:14 AM
12:97:24:99
Yeah, well, sprechen sie Deutsch? Kanst du spielen der guitarre UND die saxophone. It's je t'amore in french though. I'm also taking a begginers course in Russian so by the end of next year i will be able to speak 4 languages!!!! I like this though, prose is more useful than poetry somethimes.
To know love this great is to know pain. They go hand in hand. You must overcome the demon of death and prepare to live your life. It isn't fair to others to think of death. I know because I perseverate on death. I want to escape feeling through death. Don't let it take over you. I beat it. I will be there to help. Do not think about death
there's gold in thim thier hiles.??
its hardly poetry...but then again, it reached me and if it reached me its a form of art, thereby negating its lack of form and making it true poetry. this would make quite a movie...too bad i'd have to pay $9 to see it instead of be in it.
I'm with ranger on this one I too am sick of people fucking with votes peoples talent is being prostituted by others inadequacy and jealousy, great poem, great theme, worthy of a top 5 thats all !
Part 1 is Jeckyll part 2 Hyde, I loved the images in part 1 they were vivid, and painted wonderfully, part 2 kind of didnt belong it was so different in contrast it left me cold. Hard very hard to vote on if part 1 was it, then a worthy 10, heres a 10 i'm very tired today cant offer a very constructive comment.
Impressive, but why that thing at the end? your poem is moving enough just dedicate it thats a 2 word salute,
Condolences ! -8-
Wonderful...especially the last verse...I like this one a great deal! 9 because I like the ninth line of the third verse so much.
By the way, if you or anyone else would like to email me about poems or anything else, my address is sadistic_hippy@hotmail.com
So, in anticipation of draft poems for perusal, have a good day everyone!
Which side shall I join now...
I can easily (which is disturbing) see harry and ron getting into a gay relationship in the next Harry Potter books. Either that or Filch molests Hermione, or Hagrid is a paedophile, or Dumbledore is a crossdresser at the weekends, or Snape is Gay and is just masquerading as a nasty guy, or nearly headless nick isn't headless and is just scamming the social, or that Prof. Macgonnagal and that little teacher who does levitation are having an affair, or that seamus is actually in the IRA or that lee jordan is an illegeal immigrant.
I'm going to give you a ten again, but you'll never make it to the top fifteen...well, you might, but you'll get voted straight out.
Nice work. Oh, what a surprise, you've mysteriously gathered an anonymous vote of four...what maturity is displayed by people on this site.
And they tell me that I'm obsessed with votes.
Hahahaha! Yes!!! Oh yes!!!
Fuck me that was long!
Here you go, you may have a ten, sir, even though I didn't read half of it, I would still like to see this in the top fifteen. Perhaps we can get a certain 'someone' to vote anonymous tens, for once.
And for fuck's sake, whoever it is, LEAVE MY POEMS ALONE! STOP VOTING ANONYMOUS ZEROS! WHY AM I TALKING IN CAPITALS? OH YES, I'VE LEFT CAPS LOCK ON!
That's better.
Release those demons !
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