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Free verse № 34553

Night And Day

by MuDvAyNe

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Jan 2003 · Edited 8 Jan 2003 · 13 comments

By Day I Am Tim By Night I Am Susan My Clothes All Ragged My Hair Unkempt Beneath It All Plies My Trade . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . "Want an 'orrible time deary"

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13 comments

[10] T'ien 8-Jan-03/6:48 AM Reply
ahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhaah ur a charmer u
[0] deadstar 8-Jan-03/6:48 AM Reply
no.
[0] deadstar 8-Jan-03/6:48 AM Reply
no.
[0] deadstar 8-Jan-03/6:48 AM Reply
no.
[10] deleted user 8-Jan-03/6:49 AM Reply
how much?
[4] cherish 8-Jan-03/5:06 PM Reply
ummmm????
[n/a] Ranger 9-Jan-03/2:23 AM Reply
47
[n/a] MuDvAyNe › Ranger 9-Jan-03/4:53 AM Reply
is that pennies or pounds dearest ranger? ;)
[0] razorgrin 14-Jan-03/9:38 AM Reply
bleh. I cast "Protection From Stupid", but your powerful schmuckiness defeats the dc of the spell.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › razorgrin 14-Jan-03/9:49 AM Reply
Do spells have DCs now?
[0] razorgrin › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-Jan-03/1:55 PM Reply
I was wondering if anyone would catch that. Nah, the fucka's just got spell resistance.
[10] lunar 16-Mar-03/2:05 PM Reply
hahahaha i dont gettit oh well 10 since i give all ur work 10 coz its good
[5] Sing4Jesus! 13-Oct-06/3:54 PM Reply
I assum this refers to the sins of the flesh on a cash basis. Whores of babylon will perish!