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on some deleted poem
5 Jan 2003, 8:38 PM
ah, settle. you pissed me off when you ran off with ornella, and i swore i'd never talk to you again. farewell, laddie! adieu!
ahhh..if colleges could just carry courses in how to not be 'gauche'..perhaps the world might be a safer place too..since they've obviously dedicated entire floors to the art of skullduggery.
so, you can heal and kill, so could the nazis. rhodeisland and reno have something in common. they both turn little people big, but not like tom hanks, or nuns. nice doodle.
Farewell my fiend. Of all my opponents, you are the most ignoble (and unhinged). Good luck and good bye!
Any chance of taking D.A. and PAKI with you? Good luck and good ridance.
Settle, my friend, it's a shame to see you go-I will miss your inventive humour, and obsessive nature towards zzinnia-it was one of the more amusing features of this site...good luck in the future, hopefully you'll log back in sometime say hello etc...
so long, dude! 10
Oh yes..."In a chorus of glorious choirs that strip your flesh in fires", what a line...I'll be saying that all day.
Great poem! 9
Oh wow, this is wonderful. I'm not 100 percent sure about the last 2 words, but hey-the rest of it more than makes up for it! Good stuff-10!
Cleverdevice, you rule!
There is something hauntingly beautiful about the lines that you used. All those pretty words - It fires up the imagination.
great....but it could have used a small intro....queens of the stone age you say. Any ways I view you as something of an intersting person....find my email and send me one...it's on my profile..I'd like to know what ppl think of my work
hey maybe you'll see this....I like your style..maybe you should take a look at mine....feel free to send an email to me...you'll find it in my profile
Ahhhh Mr Smooth welcome to poemranker I cant wait to see what you get for this fantastic piece of literature have an 8 for good luck
Made me want to hang myself..
Perhaps cuckoo instead of crow: the most selfish of all birds.
You paint fire and hell on a canvas
of black.
Let down only by repetition of "forever", "demons" and "Shadows"
Do not think me disingenuous, I enjoyed the indulgence.
Hnufhnufhnuf
Very funny...very, very funny...have 9
Fuck off
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3, i have to go work now. thanks for earlier.
Hey, you promised!