Ranger
on The Dance (Part II) by purplestain
6 Jan 2003, 8:00 AM
...'cause I'm happy just to dance with you...
8
Hmm...how do I comment on a poem about someone's dad dying? This didn't quite hit me until the end, which really made me think. Also, the second line is very nice...good work. 9
I hate self righteous holier-tha-thou people too. Especially the pope. Cummon, he jacked off as a kid too. U'd better believe it.
Nice one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hnur, hnur, hnur...I can see you've been reading Bobjim's work
What's wrong with Glenn Miller?
Worth a ten to make up for the pillocks who voted zero
Damn good!
This is the opposite of Iron Maiden singing S.T.Colerige.
"and the ship it sinks like lead into the sea"
Dear Settle:
Thank you for your kind remarks concerning my poem----"God and Country."
Doug Soderstrom
PS You might want to read my newest poem entitled death.
Excellent, as a fellow pilosophy student it is sad to see rationalsit thinkers hard work undone by modern imperialists.
This is the dogs bollocks (but please dont shoot them) 10
let me slurk some coffee and we'll get down to business. Definitely smoother.
I like your style of writing, its so distinctive to you. 9
Excellent, as a fellow pilosophy student it is sad to see rationalsit thinkers hard work undone by modern empiricists.
Haiku: seventeen
syllables in three lines that
mean something useful
Quite.
Descriptively acute and a good read -8-
Excellent. I share your rage at inanimate objects trying to piss me off. Come on, other people kick the door whent they walk into it too!
Nice one!
Shouldn't you be working?