poemranker ::Solitude by Owner of the Sky

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Solitude

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Jan 2003 · 6 comments

Waterchilde lies lightly resting On moss covered oceanrocks; She can hear Oz as he is calling YellowRed voice deep and warm seeking Like slumber caught between waking And saltseashivering, missing wet embrace. (while fieryflies and their ocean sisters are dancing) On his lonely fire emerald earth throne He licks fingers reverentcarefully Tasting her on every fig devoured, ingested And ultimately intimately anchored To every ember fiber of his being. He got lost on his way to Sanctum Lead astray by seapaths crosscrossing Spreading his heart everywhichway Oh so very thin. As he turns and tosses Oz can hear her softly cajoling Swimming freely within emerald daydreams, Nestled in rain kisses melting While the dewdrops are twilight fading. (The earth is three fourths ocean, she owns you) She falls into cold, redundant Mirror shell contentment With the goddess in a mud dress Navigating cavernous secrets Free from the grappling hooks. Longing barely heavy, but spreading Mist impossible to contain They will find him like feathers floating freetwining Leaving him doomed and drunk On all the sunsets since the birth of time. [ x. swim. away. while. you. are. winning. x.]

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[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Jan-03/7:12 PM Reply
okay.
[8] Caducus 6-Jan-03/7:56 AM Reply
Descriptively acute and a good read -8-
[n/a] Owner of the Sky › Caducus 7-Jan-03/1:13 AM Reply
Thanks. :o) I haven't been posting here lately, and never really met other poets on here. :o)
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Owner of the Sky 7-Jan-03/6:52 AM Reply
That's ok, Owner of the Sky! This is a friendly community and we welcome newcomers! Poemeranker is a great place to meet other Christians and share in fellowship!
[n/a] Owner of the Sky › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-Jan-03/10:19 AM Reply
Uumm, actually, I've been a member since May last year. The reason why I haven't posted much lately is because I've read the comments left by some of the other members on others' poetry, and they were hardly constructive. The bickering was getting a little too personal and I didn't like it. I hang out at pathetic.org (another poetry site) more.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Owner of the Sky 7-Jan-03/10:29 AM Reply
That's great! Here at poemeranker, we don't mind if you 'hang out' at other poetry sites! That's one of the great things about the internet! You can go to many poetry sites! Not just one! lol! It's also a great way to meet other Christians!