The Dance (Part II)

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Jan 2003 · 2 comments

Your arms are losing their grip on me Why are you drifting away? The song has only just begun I am in a daze now You came and you are going already Hold me closer please Don't let me go You can't just leave me alone now Has this dream just turned into a nightmare? One that I will never get out of I'm sliding off the moon Bring me the sun Please take me back to the start

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[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Jan-03/2:01 PM Reply

very pleasant. a good change of pace from the elitist trust fund trash poemranker attracts. have a 9.

[8] Ranger 6-Jan-03/8:00 AM Reply

...'cause I'm happy just to dance with you...
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