that's the best cell-phone comment i've ever heard. the rest is wondrous too.

Very nice.

This is cruel man, not foreplay, you do all that to her then say goodbye -your a bad man I/T, the end kinda works though, and one enjoyed it did one. -7-

Waht a strange poem. "In your face" is oddly out of place. Your point is clear but the prose doesn't flow at all. If your serious about this poem you need to re-write it. I am especially fond of lines 10-24.

i think you should end it like this: sit on my face so i can lick, bitch.

Cool. I like the last line, but maybe i'm just raving mad. I don't know Mr.Bub, bachus. not to my knowledge, at least

delightful. Don't hang p&k, though, let the fox-dragons gnaw him to death.

it's people like you, redneck, who made me ask for a chainsaw for xmas.

awesome, sir.

So let's see if I understand...you hate your mother because she would pull your foreskin back when you were three and rub around your penis with a alchohol soaked Q-tip. It stung terribly while at the same time being the most erotic experience of your entire life. Is that pretty close?

Que pendejada.

***9** your a talent Mr Z.

The first and last 2 stanzas are beautifully written, another artform in vocab, do you comment on this site?

I like your writing it has a naked unimitable style but think if you condensed some of your work it would assault the senses more. I cant help but laugh in disbelief at the 0 vote, people spend so much time creating their best for a split second vote violating junkie - have what it deserves a 6 with potential

and the cheekiest

what exactly do you mean to do by posting others' work as your own? anyone who wanted to read this can go here: http://www.bibble.org/misc/thefish.html to read <i>Misc: The Fish</i> By Marianne Moore

Is this some sort of pasta dish you're enjoying? I like it, despite whether I'm correct in my naive assumption.

like it

almost there...

smirk-ish.8