lunar
on HATE by Blade
8 Dec 2002, 1:40 PM
really cool!!
I kike it.
Quit looking in the mirror, yurn around. i'm behind you in the window. blade. then again i heard you had a good voice..perhap we'llcall you sade..yes sade it is...where's my precious we wants it we needs it GIVES ITS TO US!
Good idea, I wish you better luck than I.
Very nice, but did you have to shout it?
YEAH! LET'S NOT CONFUSE vulgarity with art...let's see her my friend, horus8 gave you an ten?, see, he's a sucker for doctors and leather and bad form unfortunately..i'm not. however i am the jeese james of the seven-eleven roll over craze..i think you need to check your stats.
Very sweet. Funny how you can write some real dirty stuff, like 'ways to do with puberty', and beautiful stuff like this.
great title. too bad nobody cares.
ezra pound good. Settle good.
Mr. sexton Bad. Blade Bad.
Marmalade good. poo in eye bad.
cherry pie good. constipation bad.
unicorns good. unicorn blood? BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 9.
i think this is really good not like the rest of your depressing stuff and it makes sense nice one craig.
i didnt mean your depressing stuff i ment everyone elses! sorry!
the question for today is how to make tomorrow okay.
so are u also avenging eskimo or is this not stamp? im confused! cool poem tho!8
i like ur style it is very unique
i got kicked off a spanish soap opera one time at a party after work for biting this girl then getting naked and pretending my shoe was a phone...i had a four foot sunflower and was challenging fools to sword fights, ewrr flower fights? actually...daMN TEQUILLA it justs gets harder and harder to keep a straight face in the view of infinity.
perhaps.
Sell it to hallmark. now i'm all nauseous. not only was it really badly written, the subject and images induced diabetic shock. die.
*vomits* (looks up, re-reading) Maybe it wasn't as bad as the first time i read it...*collapses into vomiting again*
Well, this gave me a good grin!
Please give it a rewrite or two. I'd love to read it again.
The first stanza is gold. >:-)>