razorgrin
on some deleted poem
29 Nov 2002, 7:10 AM
rock. kendo is awesome. i miss practice in the field as the sun sets...sigh.
yay, zzinnia!
wow, that poeme is really shitty.0.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
29 Nov 2002, 4:31 AM
all i cna do is laugh at you hahahaha your dads dead hahahahaahahahahahahahahaha
heres a 0 you sick fuck, for desecrating the memory of my dad and for being so immature to vote it 1/10 because your own poetry is so shit.
Sod the dissection on the poem, i liked its vibe,and it gave me 20 seconds of entertainment so heres a 7 to jail.
Imaginative ! I wish I could do Haiku *9*
this one's stuck in my craw. i'll be back.
Very zen-like. I wouldn't hesitate to give an 8.
a fine paint indeed
A moving eulogy, stanza 4 needs more connection, thought the ending was very true to life, work with it; see what you can do -6-
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
29 Nov 2002, 4:27 AM
kind sick but oddly funny
It comes around again!
How completley and utterly ridiculous. why would anyone be guilty because they're middle class. Its like hanging ones head in shame because your cock hangs on the left hand side of ye gots. So long as you give it to us with conviction....
Were you going for tired(of work)?
If so, you're close.Definitely a good start.
see, the reason you're a fuckwit, redneck is this anti-xian thing you're so big on. it's just as stupid and bigoted as the shit you claim to oppose. here's a quick test: take any of your comments and replace "christian" with "jew" or any other religion.if you sound like a nazi, you're probably being a hypocritical dipshit. Bear in mind that I don't condone religion in general, but I don't propose killing people on the basis of their religion, either, mein herr.
redneck, you dumbass. I support mass death, but on a universal basis. Replace "american" with "nigger", "kike" or whatever group you deem fit. What do you have? KKK propaganda. Mein Kampf. I you support death, do it right, mein herr.
if anyone needs a really good argument for the active wiping out of humanity, see the fine example of fatz_whogivesafuck. I'm personally amazed that this entity has the capacity to use a mouse. If we ver needed an excuse for a neutron bomb..
you need help, please call your local alcoholics annomous, after all only an alcy could write such shit (almsot as bad as christians)
i might argue that it's released from the center, and not the soul, but that would ruin the count. i like the spirit of it.
cool.